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distilled 11-12-04 09:23 PM

distilled vs ...Xclusive...
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
Explained votes



Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 09:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 11-12-04 09:29 PM

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 09:29 PM.

Parallel 11-12-04 09:49 PM

accept hoe..........................................

System 11-13-04 11:21 AM

distilled has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 11:21 AM.

distilled 11-13-04 11:21 AM

Faggot .

distilled 11-13-04 06:07 PM

This bitch thinks he can call me out, lmao, fag

You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'

10 lines Foo'

Hurry your bitch ass up and lets get some votes

distilled 11-13-04 08:25 PM

You Faggot!!!!!

You were just online, now post up your verse.

Parallel 11-13-04 08:59 PM

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…

La Cosa Nostra 11-13-04 10:35 PM

Voted For: distilled

Omfg... Xclusive that was wack, there was one half decent punchline and even that was worded badly.

Distilled, you came aiight, mainly focusing on personals. It flowed better and was worded so much better then Xclusives wackness. Xclusive man you need to elevate badly:

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…

Wtf was that.. Seriously.. None of it made sense.. Its like saying yo yo, ummm your names distilled, can you stop time?
uhhh uhh, yo, jiggly lime..

It started nowhere, and there was no personals or punchline. Do you even know what Distilled means?

Elevate.. A lot.
Thankyou.

Peace.

distilled 11-13-04 10:47 PM

Shit if my verse don't merk you, that does, now shut up. It's all fact, accept it, and die before my rhymes!!!

uppin

Da Vinci 11-13-04 10:48 PM

This was feedback posted for distilled
 
Shit I was just bout to read these and give feedback but my ride is here, I will do when I get back

Parallel 11-13-04 11:24 PM

Nos...distilled i looked it up it means stop time...the defination i found...

distilled 11-14-04 07:39 PM

Where did you look that up???

distilled is when you distille something, like distilled water, you make it purer, along those lines, can't be bothered explainin but Damn, stop time.

your an idiot

Parallel 11-14-04 09:55 PM

want profe?.........i use a rhyme site that tells me what word mean...i dont use it to rhyme but i usto...but i can prove it...and when you explain something you dont use the word for the defanition..

~Luciano~ 11-14-04 10:48 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...



Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
...6/10
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
7/10
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
6/10
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
4/10
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
6/10

Ya punches were ok ya wordplay was overall better
and ya structure was pretty much on point
ya meta's were good this was one of your best battles i seen

You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
7/10--LOL
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
4/10
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
3/10
To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
6/10
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'
5/10

Damn u came out hittin on all cylinders wit ya opener
but u feel righ off after that
ya punches were simple and ya wordplay wasent elevated at all
i exspected alot more from u
overall u jus didnt bring it in this battle


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