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Youngstaz Dreamz
destructive paths to unhoping futures that tear away at all good construction of life within and souls witout a care or dream and face a reality that holds no promise for abundant riches or gold or cars or extreme fame and young people want a life they can't have because of the limits they put on themselves |
This poem lacked structure and flow, you should try to explore more vocabulary and really try and feel yourself when you write, this could have used more words as well, keep elevating and drop more...1
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