Big Bird vs RED BEAM
 

Battle Rules:

5 to 35 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-14-04 at 12:38 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Big Bird has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 11:09 PM.

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 11:16 PM.

ayo chek
bandanna round da face, ready to hop on to yo place,
get chu hit up wit mase, next bust a few from da trey eight//
look to ma shoulder and da Read Beam sightin',
ma words to u like,god to jews, man they so inlightin//
black on black fitted cap, wit da black chuck taylors,
Hawk[b] like a [b]sports team tryout and cut failers//
aint gay or nothing but iam a still buddy rush ya crew,
that me 2 glocks 2 niggas and we studdy ya whole crew//
then hop of and start wildin out like kiss, and lox,
i show cops my rocs, i hate scared, u shit ya rocks,
i hit the blocks, and fit the glocks, clip the cops//
Big bird dats me, seceme street, aint got no haters,
let two of him ya dome, you get topped off later//
bring glocks, four fifths shit boi waateva,hoods sweater,
ya gone be like RED BEAM WHO? cuz big bird way betta//

iight holla wun/..

u wunna type tha words, then bring tha beef
but i cant take u serious when u reppn elm street(sesame street=big bird)
i got so much to lose, and a lot to gain
im at the top of this game, cause i spits wit flame
when i read ur name, i knew we couldnt get along
ur not on my level, u writing these silly ass songs
ur not a rapper...lose that thought this moment
u gotta be lucky, cause u woke up this moanin(morning)
u know red dont do second chances, i flash quick
something like cameras, be prepared to get ya ass kicked
aint no gettn up...once i knock u down
Red bout to go up...i got this now(battle)

iight uppin nice drop home boi........

Voted For: Big Bird

this was not a great battle at all.....
i voted for big bird because he had more multis and his lyrics were better......red beam....your verse came off too simple...you didnt have any multis really and your punches came off soft........big bird...the one or two punches u had came harder than reds...even though they werent great either......you should also work on your structure and flow....reds did flow better......overall i think this is a pretty easy win for big bird......you should both elevate....no hate at all....

Vote switched by request

This was feedback posted for RED BEAM
 

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^^WTF...u crazy...uppn...i aint even gunna return that vote...usually i return HONEST votes, but that absurb

how was it not honest man.....u had 2 multis in the whole verse.....your punches just didnt come as hard a big birds......no hate...its just my opinion man.....and its only text....if he beats u in text it doesnt mean that he is a better lyricist or anything......i was just tryin to be as honest as possible....no hate at all

haha no doubt uppin this

holy shit.....my bad dawg....i just reread that shit.......wtf am i doin.......go to battle complaints or whatever and tell them to erase my vote......i dont know what the hell i was thinkin......big bird didnt even come at u....he talked about himself the whole time.....for real man thats my bad.....hopefully u can get my vote erased....im fuckin dumb i guess

Voted For: Big Bird

i wasnt really feeling da battle but big bird won it...both people needed to work on the way their verses flowed...Bird had better puches and just came harder..Beam couldve won if he woulda came a little hareder..my vote goes to BIG BIRD

seen... thanx much luv.. uppin

uppin...................................