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Why
y is peoples lifes neva da same,but always drama,
and y do people go home,but aint go no momma, y do people got they ways,but some got a phone, y do people live in da streets,but some live at home, and y do they say they dont smoke,but they'll eat some shrooms, y do pay pay for sex,but some do it for rooms,(place to stay) y do people carry a knife,but some carry a gun, and y do they kill for a job,but some kill for fun, y when they asked to do sumthin,they lie and say its allready done y when da police come,y do they run, and y do people think low of em,but otha's think they top of da shelf, y do people share,but otha's only care about they self, y am i ritin dis rap up on da internet, and y are there kids at home dat aint ate dinner yet, ey yall dats all i got rite now get at me |
pretty decent.....you couldve gotten a little bit more into depth with your emotions....it was alrite tho'
6/10 stay up return tha favor <<<<<<<<< http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160141 |
it was okay...but a little too simple to guess what the next line is gonna be...:)
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yo you were good but it still needs improvement. battle and that'll help you in every way. return da favorr in my sig.
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it was aight...i was kinda feelin it...7/10...
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