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D Fury vs Verbal Phenom
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-13-04 at 09:28 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 09:01 AM.
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D Fury has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 09:07 AM.
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I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face...
This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say... Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence... My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction... Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision... Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision... Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently... Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony... Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake... Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date... Goodluck .......peace...... |
weerrd. heres mine.
yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up |
Voted For: D Fury
Aiight Wicked One or D Fury or wateva got this one. His wordplay was much better and the punches just hit harder. Best line was Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently... Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony... Lol, that was dope. Verbal, your verse was pretty good man, you had a couple nice punches in there, but spellin wasnt too great and thats pretty important, also the punches didnt hit as had as D's. you know what i voted. |
Yo Return the favour, links up in the sig.
Pc, dope battle |
Voted For: Verbal Phenom
yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes …5 everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me …4 honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it …6 ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up …5 ^Overall u had a decent verse… work on your vocab. Kid… I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face... This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say... …4 Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence... My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction... …6 Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision... Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision... …4 Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently... Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony... …3 Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake... Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date... …4 ^Overall u had a decent verse too… punches were weak to both of you… but Cosmos. Gets my vote for comin less weak… |
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Voted For: D Fury
ambient: yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes Weak opener, punch wasn't that hard everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me Could've been worded better to make ther punch connect honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it Weak, on real punch here ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up Bad closer also Wicked One: I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face... This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say... Stretched 2nd line, punch didn't really connect Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence... My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction... Punch wasn't hard at all here Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision... Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision... Ok punch... Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently... Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony... Ok punch again, verse is improving slightly... Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake... Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date Decent closer, punch was aight Winner: Wicked One, for harder punches. Although Wicked's structure was a little off, it wasn't that bad. Ambient, all you need is some elevation... RTF at a link in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
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