yall niggas......just a lil somthing
 

yall need to stay away from me stop saying my name in a negative way
yall niggas treat me like i havent dont this now feel tha sikness i embrace
yall talk shit but when i come to ya face ya shut up like yal drunk an sour drink folden ya lungs leavin wit no air i get stronger just feeling ya heart ...........sink
battle me ya life aint worth saving like an late expired ...........................coupon
begging me to give u mercy bitch plz once i clapp ya there aint no life refunds
yall niggas cant put out my fire,cuz i was destin to hold tha fucking tourch
couldn't be bless if u was tha christ of birth,leavin yall wit no luv no remourse
yall annoying like flying bugs i'll just kill u by using tha raid ........................spray
u think u can take ova what i've started wouldn't if u was alexanda tha great
my punches is like an quick death fate to u,call myself da punch quick sand
even if u gotten tha famous bread ya rhymes still woulnt be tha # 1......brand


yall talk shit but when i come to ya face ya shut up like yal drunk an sour drink - when u drink too much sour its like u cant talk


u think u can take ova what i've started wouldn't if u was alexanda tha great - he almost did took ova da world ( i think)





my punches is like an quick death fate to u,call myself da punch quick sand - aiight that means like when i punch u u so quick to get knock da fuck out

aiight dats my verse & my explaination

feedback plz

hmph it wasnt bad but it was still good. had a little quality. return da favor in my sig.

aiiiiiiiight thanks for da feed any links or favors come in hurr i'll happily return them

aiiiiiiight stop sleeping uppimn for more feedbacks holla

decent drop...you couldve came a bit more harder on your punches,multi's n wordplay...but dont worry...just work on that


7/10

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aiiiiiiiiiight i'll return tha fav keep dem feedbacks coming and dem links holla~!

not bad your gettin better...7.6/10...your stuctures gettin better actually it is better perfect now just shorten your lines a bit more it will flow better...bad topic but good lines..

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