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In-Vision 11-13-04 04:18 PM

..Read..
 
The world is fucked up, I'm leavin, I've had it here..
slide my timbs on and jump through the stratosphere..
Travelin faster than the speed of light, blazin a trail..
You can't decipher the message, like gazin at braille..
so I've changed it up, hopin to make it easy for ya'll..
To understand with manners, u don't please me at all..
Writin diss tracks, you two called it your final words..
Came back and Upped it? Get a life, you vinyl nerds..
to be on top you must beat those better than you..
Thats why you chose us, we all more clever than you..
these two are nuts, adolesants could make these vets drop..
at point blank range you couldn't hit me with your best shot..
and spul, I was high, and still easily outsmarted you..
You Couldn't be sick if disease was a part of you..
Ya lyrics are wack, only dope to your friends on the web..
can't break the rules on DR's, so he bends them instead..
and to the rest of yall, who are caught up in the hype..
nobody is impressed jus cause you know how to type..
have over 3000 posts,here for a year and think you a vet..
but you won't battle those who you think are a threat..
Fuck a record, I'll accept any gamble, call me a bookie..
cause I won't lie I'll admit it, I'm still just a rookie..
Just remember, as your talent peaks, and your win streak ends..
I'm still improvin, 20-1 and I'm just beginning to win..

streetryda 11-13-04 04:25 PM

aiight reall tight man it flowed very well...........good vocab in places............saw some multi's which is alwyas good.......good diss on spul....haha kinda humerous....i liked the topic too it was deifferent that what ppl normally do......keep em comin man
peace~1

La Cosa Nostra 11-13-04 11:04 PM

Nice shit. Flow stayed constant and on point. The message was clear and had some nice ways of wording it. I liked this drop. Good shit brutha.

JJFLOWSUM_5 11-13-04 11:24 PM

ey dawg dis shit was nice,nice wordplay,good flow
i give u a 10/10....get bac at me homie

fluidmoon 11-14-04 02:07 AM

great vocabulary and flow to this drop man, and you definitely got the message across, dope shit, keep it up...1

villagepimp 11-20-04 11:11 PM

wildfire is in the hizzouse... 9.3/10

your almost as good as me now...

Introspect. 11-21-04 08:09 AM

good shit 8/10 i'll still own you though.....:)


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