Mosh remix kinda (audio)
 

i rapped over the mosh beat........ i was feelin like im not at this site for a reason so i recorded two tracks last nite........ both of em are kinda written and freestyled and both were done in 2 or 3 takes.... like this chorus and part of verse is free'd.... i think its ok, but drop feedback... i still aint added in this echo i wanna add in the blank spots

close this......... ima work on this shit

No offense but I rather hear tha original version of this song. Wasnt really feelin it. I know u can do better than this man. For real. 3.5/10.

yea i know....... i sed most of its freed...... but tell me y it sucked, sum more feedback

I dunno... it just didnt get my head noddin really... I wasnt feelin tha stuff u said to be honest. I know most of it was free'd but yea. I just feel u couldve done better on tha track.

i dont understand why your whispering??? ...eminem didnt whisper over this beat...he maybe put a distant effect or lowered the volume on the mic...and you need to pronounciate your words and shit...i dont understand what ur saying...and if your going to remix it then dont try to sound like the person who made it...be yourself...thats my 2 cents

return it : http://community.rapverse.com/showt...18&page=2&pp=15

yea thanx....... yea ima work on this and repost this..... cuz i juss heard it and cant hear wat im sayin...

o yea and to let u know, I didnt say I rather listen to tha original one to put u down, I was just lettin u know what was up and just bein honest y'know. I didnt wanna lie and keep everything in.

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