RV Anthem my part added (audio)
 

Kontroversey sed we could rap on his track so i did........ its partly freed but alot of it is written....... i think its ok...... my favorite part is the last two bars but i unno if u can tell wat im sayin...... ill add in the lyrics later once i remember everythin i sed..... my voice is kinda messed up too in this song and the mosh one...... i dunno y, maybe cuz it was real late/early wen i did both of em....... but be brutal...... as long as u give me reasons to why it sucks or is good.. even tell me if u hate individual lines or sum shit

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/o...galantmusic.htm

link??............

ohhhhhh fuck........ hold up

pretty good, but the quality needs some work, and yea, your vocals need clarifying a bit, but this was a decent upbeat type a track, for what it was....keep workin at it..1

Ayo
 

ayo, that was straight but you said that you don't really like it but you do like the last two bars. Well if you don't like it then you shouldn't put it on their because if you don't like it then other people might not like it. And i'm tellin' you from experience. Just a word of advice. It was hott though.

its pretty decent..whats your nationality........

haha......... im white man

wrong room.................

yea, he sed no uppin 8 times..... so i guess this is fine......... ill take my chances

wtf man....... lmao at over 60 views and only 2 or 3 actual feedbacks..... cmon people.... i dont even know if i can up shit but i guess this would be the best way to learn

Edit- Fuck i wasted my 1,000th post on this shit!!!! ohh well