peace???
violence to me
everywere I see from tv to dvd even up in mtv corrupted imagry infecting me perplexing me how can this be grown up in a world spending more money on weaponry poor people die'n Unnecessary a lesson u see we can let poor live free spend less on weaponry investing in there future makes more sense to me keep them free from hunger in *(hungary) eventually we'll see change in global econemy no need for bombs u see terrorists got new jobs in industry now they tourist guides for people like me nice imagery just a thought though it could never be so long as evil resides in the world and me. all eyez on peace. peace??? |
decent drop....
FLOW WAS GOOD... creativeness was ok u know average... topic was ok u know average... all around decent drop...... 6.8 outta 10... u gotta focus more then just flow... |
Decent Drop? Are You Kidding?
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Try extending your line's a bit. You have good rhyme's just short line's.
every little thing seem's like violence to me troubled youth everywere I see from tv to dvdeven up in mtv it's like it right to show corrupted imagry with all this mind poulltution infecting me all these strange thing's perplexing me so i sit back and ask how can this be is it right to be growning up in a world were goverment spending more money on weaponry and just letting poor people die'n Unnecessary so take this as a lesson u see with unity we can let poor live free it time to spend less on weaponry and investing in there future it's this sorta thinking makes more sense to me blah.. i just tryed to add more to it as an example.... but with longer line's you can get a better flow. pz |
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