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..:Outbreak:.. 11-14-04 08:12 AM

"..Gore.."
 
People Feel Repulsed By The Sickness Of My Imagination
I mean, Gore Provide's a answer in every Situation
Make the Most of Anything that Come's To Hand
Household Item Used as a Weapon, ain't so Bland
If a Nigga Come up to you and Say's "Empty Ya Pocket's"
Don't be Shook Reply "Ima Put a Banger In each of ya Eye Socket's"
Incise Ya Side With Garden Plyer's & Wire ya Ball's up ta Cable Wire's
Spill Hydrolhic acid on ya Skin and watch it spread Like a Forest Fire
Rip ya Teeth out of ya Gum's and Clamp them on ya Testicle's
Abduct ya Wifey and Operate On Her..Like we Extra-Terrestrial's
Crack ya Fingernail's and Make ya Swallow Em Whole________
Release a Feast Of Petrol Drenched Locust's To Eat Ya Soul________
Stab Ya Knee Cap's With Rusty Blunt Butter Knife's
Leave ya In a Blood Dipped Heap Laughing, while we Ride By
So any of ya Fucka's Wanna Try and Challenge ..:Outbreak:..
Remember That Your gonna be another Victim to Rape....

I felt like Typing... :thumbup:

..:Outbreak:.. 11-14-04 09:53 AM

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Effect 11-14-04 10:24 AM

it's a peace of shit....

..:Outbreak:.. 11-14-04 10:28 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sinner
it's a peace of shit....

Thank You....Herb...
Upping for a Non-Herb to Give feedback...and Sinner just stop Rapping you Fag..:) Or Battle Me... :thumbup:

Compose 11-14-04 10:37 AM

dont worry about sinner his accent on his audio is a piece of shit...

it was pretty good if it was your first written keep going,
Incise Ya Side With Garden Plyer's & Wire ya Ball's up ta Cable Wire's
Spill Hydrolhic acid on ya Skin and watch it spread Like a Forest Fire

^favorite bar of the verse...you got good vocab and complexity

peace

..:Outbreak:.. 11-14-04 10:41 AM

Lol...I wanna Battle Sinner...:)

Thanx For The Feedback and it was a little freestyle...

Compose 11-14-04 10:45 AM

aight then it was good if it was a free, u new or this is jus an alias?

..:Outbreak:.. 11-14-04 10:47 AM

I'm New :)_____________You wanna Gore Battle?

M.E.R.C.Y. 11-14-04 11:18 AM

son who wanna battle da kid

M.E.R.C.Y. 11-14-04 11:20 AM

yo outbreak chill cuz i dont think ur dat nice bluffin n shit

Compose 11-14-04 11:28 AM

^lol mercy hes better then you jus shh before you get your first loss....look at your rhymes...then look at his

..:Outbreak:.. 11-14-04 02:24 PM

^^u___p___p____i____n____^^

DrasticMeasureZ 11-14-04 04:35 PM

aiiiiiight its an ok "free"

da flow was messed up in some parts and u had some good vocab

but dont try to stretch ya lines it's messing up da flow

but anyway good vocab nice rhyme scheme

i give u

7/10 work on da flow

Retro 11-15-04 01:52 PM

^_____________________________________________^ Gimme Feed :)

EastCoast 11-15-04 06:19 PM

goddamn your violent lol........it was cool drop some feed on mine....the declining of rap....good shit mayne.....7.5 or 8/10...kepp em cummin..........~1~


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