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Men-Iz vs GKillaz05
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10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Crew Battle.. VT vs Da RIP ...Better Bring Da Heat!! Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 11-15-04 at 11:16 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 11:43 AM.
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I aint a homosexual but I know that this MeN-Iz....
Playing with more balls then in a game of tennis... Say your rich n iced out I bet I can eat your money... Men's hopin' from my punches like the Easter Bunny... No many how many D/R's ya got you just cant win... Sayin' your underground but just hidin' like Bin Ladin... The only W you'll ever see is the one in front of hack... Ya your WHACK... faker then the meat in a BigMac... The only way this guy ever gets a vote is if he begs... My punches leave ya mind scrambled like some eggs... Went my verse without mentioning your lame crew... So when Da RIP wins Violent Type wont blame you... |
MeN-Iz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 01:33 PM.
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hate-my-rhymes?gkilla you is just a waste-of-time,i'll murder you with my lines,
where the medics at? quick go-and-find,cause im "KILLIN-THIS-NIGGA" like "BLACK-ON-BLACK CRIMES", styles-to-weak,only options is to retreat from my punches that is bringin-you-heat, cant get up?bout to decease,so he "GRAPS-MY-LEGS" for shelter, now i really got em "BARING DE-FEET",(Baring Defeat) unable to hang with the flow i emit,admit styles played,youve been outwit, becuase MeN-Iz is "TEARIN-UP-THIS-THREAD" like "RIPPIN-OUTFITS" you talk shit,but ur unable to back it up like the opposite of a hero, so the score is changed, V.T.-4 and R.I.P-0,(lets go...........) Styles-is-lame,no need to wait-upon-your-verse this win imma claaim, cause when this battle is done,your crew will be "NO-LONGER-EXISTENT" just like yall "NAMES", *drops the mic on the floor,then hands gkilla his ass* Explanations: Bar 1- Killin-This-Nigga Nigga/Black Black on Black Crime....get it? Bar 2- when you bare something you grasp it...when you bare defeat you admit to defeat Bar 3- Outfits are made of thread...when you rip outfits then your ripping thread Bar 4-V.T. is beatin R.I.p. 3-0...afta this it'll be 4-0...:) Bar 5-R.I.P. means you Rest In Peace...which means your no longer existing Spit Bitch................. |
please do not sleep on this...and i want some honest votes...dont vote for a specific person just because they voted for you in a battle
gkilla i know youve been duin that shit...ur to garbage to have a win uppin |
This was feedback posted for MeN-Iz
danm thats fire right there.......
YEA kid u R.I.P that nigga 4-sho..... V.T to the top... |
ayo why these guys think they the hottest shit?... you dont flow, and then you act like I get people to vote for me!! Just so when I KO you.. your ass gots a reason. Great personals too
Explanations: Bar 1- Killin-This-Nigga Nigga/Black Black on Black Crime....get it? (yo im white.. personal dont work.. but good try) Bar 2- when you bare something you grasp it...when you bare defeat you admit to defeat (meh.. not explained to well.. but some herbs will like it) Bar 3- Outfits are made of thread...when you rip outfits then your ripping thread (played.. read this thread shit to much) Bar 4-V.T. is beatin R.I.p. 3-0...afta this it'll be 4-0... (lie) Bar 5-R.I.P. means you Rest In Peace...which means your no longer existing (YES! first one that didnt suck.. good job) "*drops the mic on the floor,then hands gkilla his ass*" ayo.. get your hands off my ass and onto the voters dick if you want a vote |
Voted For: MeN-Iz
MeN-Iz Personals: (7/10) this was the strongest part of your verse, you had really good personals my fav was hate-my-rhymes?gkilla you is just a waste-of-time,i'll murder you with my lines, where the medics at? quick go-and-find,cause im "KILLIN-THIS-NIGGA" like "BLACK-ON-BLACK CRIMES", pretty dope there. Structure: (5/10) seeing how this is text battles, some of your lines were stretched, diffcult to flow to in my head and just not really that greatly organized. Overall: (6.5/10) i gave you a 6.5 because some of your verse was stretched, and did flow great at all. But you had fairly good punches and personals so that is what gave most of your verse the illness. GKillaz05 Personals: (4/10) this was not a very strong part of your verse. The best punch you had here was Went my verse without mentioning your lame crew... So when Da RIP wins Violent Type wont blame you... it was aiight, but that great. Some of the lines were kind of generic though. Structure: (8/10) This is pretty much what the good part of your verse was. It was very easy to read and flow to. the lines transisted good, and the length of all lines were str8. Overall: (6/10) This was very close, but you could of won this with some better more directed personals/punches to MeN-Iz, keep elevating .pz. |
no dout upp'in for more votes........................
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[COLOR=BLACK][SIZE=2][B]Hater!!!!....if you callin my punches wack....what does that make yours?.....bitch And yes i do flow....just read it right...maybe you'll understand...and i dont think you gone KO me....as wack as your verse was....you better think again....and im up 1-0 Gkilla....just admit it....you and the rest of your crew are a bunch of wack herbz |
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Hater!!!!....if you callin my punches wack....what does that make yours?.....bitch And yes i do flow....just read it right...maybe you'll understand...and i dont think you gone KO me....as wack as your verse was....you better think again....and im up 1-0 Gkilla....just admit it....you and the rest of your crew are a bunch of wack herbz |
Uppin HONEST votes peeps
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yeah man.. we got a whack crew..cuz we all are vets... that have been here longer then anyone in your crew!! ... your just lucky we all didnt throw in our all on your herbz!
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Uppin for GKilla, easily took him. Men-iz lay down boy Vote removed |
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