Fire!!!!!!!!!
 

you no before i do any thing i dont neva think,
alls i do is smoke,steal,run,and drink da drink,
but u no i blow up big on da charts like a plasma sreen,
but i'll stop every body's breathin like an asma scream,
and i walk around cause all my raps is da illest,
but u caint hide it cause i no dat u can feel dis,
so i aint come to talk,u no i juss came to spit,
dats how i know knowin u,u aint gon do shit,
i gotta tell them they aint shit,they juss disgraces,
cause im blowin up big,and puttin it in they faces,
cause im like an acrobatic,in da back of the attic,
and im gettin at it, cause i aint hardly had it,
pretty soon u gon b able to buy my record at them cd stores,
walkin along side wit me askin do you see these whores,
and i got about one more bar to go LEFT,
but im RIGHT on time when it hit ya chest,

Ey Yall Give Me Some Feed Back Please...
Ill Return Da Fav.come on give me some feed back

come on yall give me some ma fukin feedback

Sorry But I was'nt Feelin' It...Basically JJFLOWSUM_5=Wack and Shit...Ha Ha...Whatcha Gon Do?

Yo JJ dawg dat was pretty good...

Flow-7
Structure-6

Dawg on da real overall i give u an 8...

Yo mayne I'm battlin' Two-Bit, check it out in frontlines...

Holla Back

it was aight...i give it a 6/10...

ey yall let me get some feedback please

6/10...it was aight...

Wasn't Bad.u Upp'd Ya Game A Little I See.7/10.keep Elevating.

ayo i was feelin ya spit dawg, it had sort of a good structure and flow was nice n' tight
7/10 ~1~
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ey yo thanx for da feedback yall..uppin
for some more...holla