*Troop* vs E Looch
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines since u can only come with 8 all the time
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no aim or pm for buddy votes << yea u dont get to do that this time

Minimum posts to vote: 800

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 07:31 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 08:25 PM.

*Pics up Mic*
*Lets Looch start talk and smacks em wit Mic*
Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement


...And u call this Ni99a A Vet?
*Throws Mic at ya feet*


...He has Cash movein in his avy=Financial Income
His Aim=Bloodpressure187
He said hes a legend in his own mind
He was supposed 2 be Retired

E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 09:00 PM.

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*



*slaves couldnt talk to other people get it?
*glass house is and old school whip
* < those are asteriks by the way

i shouldnt have to explain this shit though


if u dont get the personals or anything else dont vote

lol u are fucking garbage

Voted For: *Troop*

peeepin the isht..........................................


Vote Removed

yea hit the wrong button, Ill let strobe know.....

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

yo im gonna dro a vote on this later, wanted to see how it was going.

Uppin this shit on this sorry ass garbage considered a vet

Voted For: *Troop*

E Looch...:
put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
^^meh 4/10...not very good weak rhyming

small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
^^6.3/10...not bad good vocabulary...not bad punch

reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
5/10...not very good weak punch...not bad flow

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
3/10...bad rhyme didnt even rhyme nothing great..

life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
6/10...didnt realy rhyme but good punch..but not a rhyme..

Troop:
Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
7/10...good punch

Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
6/10...good vocabulary and not bad punch

Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
6/10...good multis...and vocabulary and punch
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
7/10...pretty dope punch...

One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
8/10...very good vocabulary...


return favours in links...Sig

Voted For: E Looch

*Troop*: 1st bar was ummmm....a personal but honestly it was pretty whack and non-effective. 2nd bar was decent but...it that's actually true you should post links:thumbup: until that happens I'll call that a "fake personal". 3rd bar... first part of it was nice but then the 2nd part of it really made it crap because it went self-glorification on yourself. 4th bar was okay but pretty played thing. slightly effective though in my opinion. last bar was a personal and effective and that's about it. overall: 6/10

E Looch: 1st bar..well you taught me something I didn't know what asteriks were until you explained it LMFAO. well I understood it. nice opener and best bar dope shit. 2nd bar was okay 1st part was a nice personal but 2nd line was whack shit honestly. 3rd bar= 1st line was self-glorification not liking that at all but 2nd line had a nice personal to it but that's about it. 4th bar was pretty good I liked the set-up of it. final bar was not good...to be honestly it was whack:)
overall: 7/10

vote: E Looch BLAH!

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

troop you came played man...no offense but i reckon you lost...fuck a vote...have fun with this..
oh n looch it was aighht but nothin that was...wow.

^ glad some body noticed thosed atari lines

no kinda punchs either shit was like an 8 yr old wrote it weak ass shit

and im garbage troop? only that bitch xclusive would vote for u on that lame shit

u need to up ya game son your shit is boring to read

i win