SOme of My Muzic Shit
 

my 2 links

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1732690


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=160240&page=2

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now my music sites are www.soundclick.com/jayjking

just give some feedback...whatcha think

keep it real-lyrics is decent......same with flow delivery is aight
oeverall this was pretty good

Ay you got any songs? since you gave me feedback i'll give you some back...just drop a link....thanks fam....~1~

naw its aight fam..........i got a collab goin ill post that up wheneva

ok soon as you do i'll post some feedback....pzz ~1~

Uppin for some feedback

Uppin for some feedback

Uppin for some feed

ay nice shit keep that up....rated that hot

Is aite.

No Love beat is crazy........are u able to send it to me....

work on shortin up yo sylbles.

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YEA NO DOUBT lol i was feelin that track too

I peeped No love

Beats hott

First Verse. Damn alot of static in this shit.. quality is not good...the presence is not there... put some emotion in this shit.. mean what you sayin.. lyrics is iight.. flow is coo.. but sound like u readin off paper or somethin

Hook is ehhh

Second Verse is a bit better delivery is nice... I like your voice...flow is coo... Lyrics is str8....Yall two mesh together pretty well... You should do somethin to that hook to make it stand out from the verses a bit more

Solid shit .. work on the quality.. But this was a good listen


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798

Get at that when u can

Pz.

I gotta new song up its called Breathin Fire watch ya'll think of that

i peeped whats the deal.... pretty solid, not quite all clean wit the feel and sound, but close.... i liked the feel of it how u spat wit the emotion of the name of your chorus, pretty aight, i dont know how you can get your feal and sound perfect cuz im still workin, but pretty decent drop, you kinda sound like lil wayne..... well hit me back wit some feedback... i aint got my own sound click page but a song im on is on saraan's page' song called back to the feature.
http://www.soundclick.com/saaran
^^^site
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158068
^^^thread link
peace

thanks for the feed i'm uppin for some more pzz ~1~