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Jay-SmileZ 11-15-04 10:00 AM

Fuck these Crews...I'm a one man Army!!!!
 
Elevationg-chasing- 'astral places' destroy-'facists bases'/
blow-up-wit 'scorchin pages' while-facing-they-'tasteless agents'//
one man solo that can kill whole crews like 'nukes-in-buildings'/
'tombs-is-filling' wit corpses of men plus they 'foolish-children'//
'bullets-hitting' that the mags clack sounds 'natural-to-ears'/
'matter-factual' when my heat circumvent ya 'perrnial-fears'//

Loveliss Grandz 11-15-04 11:15 AM

Nice Drop Jay.good Vocab Good Flow Good Structure.7/10.keep Em Comin'


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