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anxiety 11-15-04 11:08 PM

Who Will Succeed?
 
...I'll tell you who will go far in this game...
...People who aren't afraid to use another part of the brain...
...People who aren't just another part of the chain...
...People who put, every bit of their heart in the game...
...But you probably want me to be more specific...
...Before i go ballistic... This is what you need to be terrific...
...Or at least not horrific...
...It'll be the people with passion...
...Not the people harassin...
...While you bitches are actin...
...Im just sitting here laughin...
...Exactin, my shit so i can stay rappin...
...Maybe i'm over reactin...
...But you gotta show ur reactions...
...I'll send most of you packin...
...And you know it's gon happen...
...Cause i been sitting here mappin...
...Who's back imma be cracking...
...Put the beat down on untill their vision is blackened...
...Attack him, Jack him, and crack him...
...Why you laughing, it could be you...
...I got ur crew asking, what should we do...
...But there aint shit you can do unless you try to counter it...
...But like a con mans money all your lines are counterfit...
...I fell off? Well shit something caught me quick...
...If you want an ounce of dignity you should probably quit...
...I lost respect after April, no way to get it back...
...But im known well enough to say ya shit is whack...
...You think your on fire, well i better stomp it out...
...Dont be coppin out... Or at least just watch ya mouth...
...You tell me im whack, but shit i aint even trying...
..Just like the economy your steadily declining...

..ADLIB.. 11-15-04 11:22 PM

this was a good drop. i agree with what ur sayin.
...While you bitches are actin...
...Im just sitting here laughin...<good shit.
i lost u at the end a bit tho. 7/10

DrasticMeasureZ 11-15-04 11:26 PM

No No Fuck 7/10

Dat Was Dope Good Statement And Flow

9/10..................word Vocab Is Dope, Da Flow Is Dope

But Da Truth Expresses More And That What It's All About

anxiety 11-15-04 11:26 PM

The end is about how i lost respect on this site... People say i fell off... But i didnt... Im still good... And they cant handle me... Thats what the end is about:thumbup:

Willa 11-15-04 11:31 PM

lol dope i agree with what ur sayin
flow was pretty good
vocab was ok
structure straight
8/10 good job anx

anxiety 11-15-04 11:32 PM

Thats yall... Just getting some shit off my chest...

intensify effect 11-15-04 11:44 PM

nice drop fam....
i liked the flow..
i like the topic N how u stood N focused on it...
i like the creativeness on it N how u layed out the verse...
vocab good N all around tight drop fam....

8.0 outta 10....

come home to Violent type where ya skills are being proven every-time again N again....

just ask DA R.I.P MUAHAHA....

im up 2-0 agenist EXsclusive
im up agenist bizzey 3-2
loveliss grandz beat S.outsyda 5-1..
men-iz is up 1-0 agenist some other none name-brand nigga from R.I.P...
artik phros is beating bizzey 2-0....

come on now do u see how we prove our-self N not only talk shit like R.I.P N yet get schooled we do the schooling around here.....

holla at me mang...
V.T is a home for u....

* think about it *

anxiety 11-16-04 12:32 AM

Are you asking me to join your crew? Im with C.S. if thats the case...

intensify effect 11-16-04 12:46 AM

^^ yea i was asking u to join cuz i dont see or know whos down with C.S....
honestly i only seen u repp'in that sig....

whats ya roster??
V.T is the move to make fam...
think about it...
N when u see the new improve crew thats about to happen u should def join them...
ya will see....

Willa 11-16-04 12:55 AM

nope cs is the best

anxiety 11-16-04 12:56 AM

C.S. Is fam homie... Cant fuck with fam...

intensify effect 11-16-04 01:04 AM

^^ feel ya loyalty......

i like that.....

much respect.....

but i just wanted to know the roster to see whos downw ith C.S....

i havent seen any C.S member really N honestly...

fluidmoon 11-16-04 01:39 AM

This had dope flow, and i liked your rhyme scheme, you stayed on top of the topic,good job on this....1

SUPERVILLAIN 11-16-04 05:43 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by intensify effect
^^ feel ya loyalty......

i like that.....

much respect.....

but i just wanted to know the roster to see whos downw ith C.S....

i havent seen any C.S member really N honestly...


^^^you've peeped my hangman diss (and left a response). thats a crhymie experience in itself. c.s. is all around you buddy. we're out and about more than you think. keep on....uppin'.

s.v.

SUPERVILLAIN 11-16-04 05:47 AM

sick shit anx...you ripped it. glad to see you back crhymie. i dug the drop, its fire, pat yourself on the back. yeah muh-fuckaz......we ridin'. one love...SINDICATE CITY!!!

anx...when ya got time, please drop some feedback for my hangman diss here in open mic...

s.v. deadly...big bad c.s.


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