Straight Spit
 

a yo a spit rymes the same way i spit fire/
nice and hot/
my rymes will fuck u up right at the spot/
u never had me/
u never had ya ryme/
i break it down for u time afta time/
my rymes hit u so hard u'll be leaven a red trail /
i got u seein the light like u just got outa jail/
i got my own style i call it straight spitten/
when ur done battlen me, u wish u didnt/
when i ryme i dont just put words together/
i write for a reason, shit i could go on forever/
but i'ma end it now cause i'm sicka ya'll fools/
i'm out, peace. u messin wit da wrong crew/

not my best, just short shit. holla

Not Very Impressive, to tell ya tha truth...

I felt like it was basic & there was no concept except "im this, im that"

Try to create a more original piece, and try to increase your vocab & imagery...punches also need a bit of work as they really werent hard hitten ,try to really grab tha attention of tha reader/listener...

Keep postin bro, only my opinion...take care

peace n god bless

nothing special the flow was alright a little simple on volcab and i don't think it really had much of a direction if it was a keystyle it would be alright