RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Textual Releases (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=5)
-   -   Lifes A Challenge (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160644)

Effect 11-16-04 03:14 PM

Lifes A Challenge
 
we have a generation of fucked up people still in there youth
we all h8 fake people like watchin eastenders it's human abuse
We live on in this world and don't share our point of views
all we do is fuckin live on earth and watch peeps die on the news
it's pretty anoying to just watch everyone in this world suffer
it' make you feel utter sickened by all this shit and mutter
But what can we do there is nothing in this world thats good
if I had the powers of god i'd blow it up if I fuckin could
But anyway thats life iit's fucked up it'll always fuck ya days
do you really think god wants us to sing in a book of praise? nope
it's like a game we are all in here to cry die and feel pain
our brains can't take so much stress we all start goin insane
I might flow dark but shit always my words are from the heart
people don't respect me cause they feel the energy that I start

Hangar1ne 11-16-04 03:35 PM

thats was pretty dope.......dark......still madd simple though......try throwin in more multis and diff. rhyme concepts......switch the flow around peace

Effect 11-16-04 03:40 PM

I didn't want to throw multies in this one i had a few not many.... I actually could do with a few other tips cause sometimes i see peeps rhyme 3 lines together but I didn't know you could do that can someone help me out on that please... peace

Retro 11-16-04 03:55 PM

Here we go Sinner Begging for mo' Help........You Juss can't elevate Nigga...

Effect 11-16-04 05:42 PM

wind break get the fuck outta my threads pussy...

..ADLIB.. 11-17-04 01:44 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ..:Outbreak:..
Here we go Sinner Begging for mo' Help........You Juss can't elevate Nigga...


heh heh heh...........!


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:03 AM.