am I red-e for battle
 

I hope your red-e for the shit you started/
you got me seein' red visions of your head as a target/
cross-hairs got your wig split now you need a weeve/
extensions of complextion makin you bleed...
you couldn't b a seed if you came out of my dick,and I planted you in the ground and tended to you with a ho and a pick.
it wouldn't work son you will never grow/
I'm rollin-dubbs, you rollin TYCOS/(the little remote control cars)

think I'm red-e for battle yet?

FEEDBACK >>>>PLEASE

no i dont' think you are and i think you should umm... what is it called umm... rhyme well there's ya feedback hoffa

na son......get mo practice

Aiight...Man, i think you really need to elevate your punching standards...None of em really caught my eye and made me think.."Shitz Was Dope"...nahmean?..try to add more imagery & originality to em..

Keep elevatin man..

Peace n god bless.