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Sub-0 vs X2daJ
Battle Rules:
6-8 linez no crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no dr Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-19-04 at 05:14 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
X2daJ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 05:14 PM.
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Alright. I'll assume this is the spot where I say I'm checking in. 4320 Minutes... woah.
Methinks I could beat that one. |
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Sissy faggot, you want to curl up in fear like an armidillo Smack you in the face with the mic, shit is thicker then Brillo ... time to get serious with this sleaze... You wanna get rough with this, bitch, I'm fuckin violent I'll have you crashing in hell like satanic kamakaze pilots! got nothing in battles... Hey, Aaron Carter, it's time to stop rapping! I will make you ingest my shit like you were eating what i was crapping~ Stepping to me? Kid, don't be silly You couldn't cum (ph)at if you masturbated to free willy!! [/align] |
Dammit... I put a squigle instead of an exclamation point on the 3rd bar.
Anyways, you're up. |
Sub-0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 05:36 PM.
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Is this guy alive anymore?...
Whenever the due date is, you don't come, you are a weenie... And that's all there is to it! |
Dis dude spittin dat shitty shit, heres a pen, you should go to the desk/
Im bout to go to dis kids chest, and deliver some fast cold shit like da Polar Express/ Ill eat your bars like snickers and discard the rapper/ I have dis dude losin more weight runnin from me than using Stacker(fat burner)/ My bars got flows but you can't drink without paying/ Dis dude must take lesson from skunks cause he stinks before spraying/ Son,my spits are nastier off the top like head lice/ After im done dis time dont ask for a rematch, y u wanna be dead twice/ |
uppin 4 votz!! return da favor!!!!!
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uppin 4 votz holla back ~1~
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Voted For: Sub-0
nice verse sub-0. X2daJ verse was gay all around. both of yall need to elevate though. sub had a better flow and harder punches. he also had a better vocabulary. X2daJ needs to make friends with a dictionary and learn everything about it. no hate just an honest vote. return tha favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...743193&posted=1 |
Voted For: X2daJ
well i think that you took this because it was easy to read and the flow was aiight...you should work on harder punches and a few better metas and maybe some multis....but thats of course your choice.... sub i think that you lost this because of your structure and how it flowed...its not about what it soiunds to you but to the voters reading it and you have failed in that catagory there fore you lose.work on those 2 things man and youll get better.... return the votes with an honest vote in the siggy... |
^Would, but don't have enough posts.:( Sorry man.
Anyways, bumping thread for voters! You know you want to! |
God dammit.
I will vote in TWO of your battles if you vote!!! |
uppin 4 votz return da favor!!! Holla back!!
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