Inception vs *Troop*
 

Battle Rules:

8 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biteing
No Dr

explained votes only

3-0=KO

U called me out and u get merked

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 05:22 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Inception has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 05:24 PM.

Have Troop "In A Tough Spot" Like A "Bad-Residence"
I'll "Blast-Men-And-Dent" Ya Frame, Cuz My Punchez "Beat Ya Eyez" And Stay More "Ahead Of Ya Pupilz" Than A "Class Prezident"

Treat Him Like "Titanic Inveztorz" Till He'z "Found-Dreamz-Sunk"...Blaztz Simply "Down-This-Punk"
Cuz I'm About To "Steal This Franchizez Spotlight" Like A "Yao Ming Dunk"

Troop Punchez Are A "Family Friend", Just "Wishing They Connected " Like "Fake Cousinz"
Ya Take Nothin, I See-Thiz-Snake-Bluffin..Cuz He Only "Toying With Creativity" Like An "Eazy Bake Oven"

Like "Low Class Movie Theaterz" This Bitch "Lackz Featurez"...Eazily "Blazt Speakerz" Cuz Ya "Rapz Weaker"
And Have A.I. Frantically "Searchin For This Legend" Like "Confuzed Map Readerz"

wow nigga u that slow witted to take a day when u set up a battle

No u suck ni99a i gotta go 2 work unlike some Bumz

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 12:06 AM.

the 1st Battle i Neglected so u came again for Further Inspection
Verbally Assasinated your "Ghost" No Respect for this Inception
Zero Respected so No one Pays Attention when your Ranks Givin
Incept Vanishes often from Talent like Anerexics at Thanks Givin
Your Rhyme Ability Resembles your Sig...So no one even Looks
You Droppin Nice is Inconsistent like Narcaleptics Reading Books Disrespected by Every Single Crew No one gets your Goodies
Now Stop Smothering AI like "Middle Weights"in Infant Hoodies


Blahh bitch didnt even try check how long it took me 2 drop

and his old name was "GHOST 354"
and He wants in AI

ok i took 4 minutez longer then u to post nigga

an yo who the fuck said i wanted to be in that crew i havent even joined any crew since i been on this dumb shit

Voted For: Inception

yo Inception that was sik..u got mad wordplay with that class president line yo..ya punches killed him..even though not really any personals all ya punches and wordplay killed it..your structure was kinda messed up though..so it messed up the flow..overall 9.5/10(i dont give 10's)


troop dawg u came really weak..i know you coulda came harder than this..i seen u do a lot better..u tried some personals though which was good..i was feelin it a little but not as much as Inceptions...but ur strucutre and ur flow was on point and u had some good vocab...overall 7/10


vote - Inception




if u could return the favor in the sig with an honest vote.....

yea man coo 2 all dat
he went wayyy over the line limit

this aint gone be up 4 2 much longer

that was 10 linez dumb nigga

theyre stretched linez az u text headz like to call it

Limit was 8 Linez homeboy

Kidz and not respectin rulez these dayz

Welp o well

ye my fault im meant itz 8 i forget u suck to bad to read 10 of your linez i spit 8 look at it moron

Residence"
Prezident" < 1 bar
"Down-This-Punk"
Yao Ming Dunk" < 2nd bar
"Fake Cousinz"
"Eazy Bake Oven" < 3rd bar
"Rapz Weaker"
Confuzed Map Readerz" < 4th bar

if u cant read and see where a rhyme stopz honeslty u shold give up cause a shit stinkz already

it lookz longer cause of my so called "stretched linez"

bitch nigga

Voted For: *Troop*

Inception:
Word... first few bars were FIRE! ... but from there it kept goin down and down. The hot bars were self glorification and the wack ones were punches.. so like.. that fucked you up a bit..

structure was WAY OFF.. flow was on point though.. multis helped it a fair bit..

Things that annoyed me about you:
stop spelling shit with a "z" its pretty gay..

stop using speech marks when theres no wordplay...
and if youre gonna hyphen your multis, HYPHEN ALL OF EM..

also, try using a smaller font.. i think thatll help ya structure heaps..

troop:
word... nicely structured (except for the second last line... but that was an honest mistake)... The thing that put you above your opponent was your punches.. every bar punched.. you had nice similies in there, very creative. flow was on point the whole time..

incept did a few things better, but troop had the ALL ROUND better verse...