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Brajole2002 07-06-02 12:54 AM

Freestyle (short)
 
stop, state ya name/
try to tell me u winnen but u aint even in the game/
fuck that rookie shit/
i ryme to hurt, my ryme is called spit/
fuck u if u think u better, fuck u if u think u tha shit/
i'm tellin u right now that none of ya'll can really spit/
u put big rymen words together and call it a rap/
keep rymen the way u do u'll get fucked in a snap/
let me break it down since ya'll niggez dont know about spitten/
it's just flowen wit ya mind and nothen is written/
ya just rap wat u think and not try to domnate/
but u fuckaz are so week i'll leave u wit no fate/
but before u exit the ryme u leave in style/
after u battle me u wont be round here for a while/
peace

Direkt-Threat 07-06-02 01:13 AM

...Simplistic Rhyming try to elevate your voacbulry...are we battling or what man?

Messiah 07-06-02 05:33 AM

This is VERY basic, u can certainly do with increasing your mental capacity of vocabulary...it makes for interesting lyrics, when it is combined with dignified descriptions & smooth flow...

Keep posting..

Peace n god bless


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