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Mad Dog 11-17-04 05:57 AM

M-Dog vs 3rd-Shift
 
Battle Rules:

16 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes (For or Against)
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No D/r Votes
No Hate Votes
No Unexplained Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 750

Check in by: 11-20-04 at 05:57 AM

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System 11-17-04 09:44 AM

M-Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 09:44 AM.

System 11-17-04 09:51 AM

3rd-Shift has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 09:51 AM.

Mad Dog 11-17-04 09:53 AM

Here's a prime example of RV's biggest fall off,
Had mad skills but lost his back like a sawn off,

U dissed outta desperation yet ya still hesistating,
& ur punches are as successful as virgins penetrating,

The sparks gone admit it you failed to come stronger,
You lace ya battles wit sleepin pills to make them last longer,

This cats slow to react thats why he wins like a snail,
But ya better up a shift coz them losses hot on ya tail,

It's funny because you claim that ima wack emcee,
Yet you PM'd me once sayin "when you spit use my beats",

Man u need to make ya mind up and not be "hypocritical",
And whats wit the negativity damn "this-ho's-synical",

This cats a pessemist...i think he really needs a lift,
But is he dark...na thats his shadows from his 3rd night shift,

Ya want ya beats to be dope but they'll always be hype-less,
And ya views on the game is like ur ways...forever in blindness,

You dissed me incorrectly better check ya sight,
Coz the least you coulda done was spell my name right,

So ya wackness helped you to suceed ya mission,
Beat me?...naw i meant give you 20-20 vision,

3rd-Shift 11-17-04 01:29 PM

Hellen Keller has seemed to one-upped all of us RV vets
at least that bitch is deaf to ya audio an blind to ya fuckin text :laugh:
you figured you'd catch wreck wit 20 linez, thats gutter you utter
ya broken vocab sounds like debri fed through a boat rutter
i asphyxiate this mutts mutter, ya silence does service to a track
this crap sounds more like simon cowell impersonatin Kool G Rap :nono:
its the truth i peep, you being puss to the highest degree
dog and feline combine to bring you bein the PUSSY of the offspring
fuck yo RV allies, yo D2R "yes men" can kiss my ass
thought you was the messiah to that crew but that shit aint last
any resistance you put forth is futile, go back to suckin cunt lips
that way gonorrhea can make ya lip'sync'd personals both hotter and sick
even the deceased Ray Charles can see, the fakeness behind ya ideaology
the only reason u post audio is to gass up yo audacity
hidin behind that "tony blarish" accent is none other than a hip-hop fiend
"fencin" wit erect dicks to see who first punctures the spleen(faggot)
spittin inadequate linez causes the punishment of a capital crime
pffffttttt...this shit happenin to me maybe next time

3rd-Shift 11-17-04 01:30 PM

RV Malfunctions yet again....


Hellen Keller has seemed to one-upped all of us RV vets
at least that bitch is deaf to ya audio an blind to ya fuckin text :laugh:
you figured you'd catch wreck wit 20 linez, thats gutter you utter
ya broken vocab sounds like debri fed through a boat rutter
i asphyxiate this mutts mutter, ya silence does service to a track
this crap sounds more like simon cowell impersonatin Kool G Rap :nono:
its the truth i peep, you being puss to the highest degree
dog and feline combine to bring you bein the PUSSY of the offspring
fuck yo RV allies, yo D2R "yes men" can kiss my ass
thought you was the messiah to that crew but that shit aint last
any resistance you put forth is futile, go back to suckin cunt lips
that way gonorrhea can make ya lip'sync'd personals both hotter and sick
even the deceased Ray Charles can see, the fakeness behind ya ideaology
the only reason u post audio is to gass up yo audacity
hidin behind that "tony blarish" accent is none other than a hip-hop fiend
"fencin" wit erect dicks to see who first punctures the spleen(faggot)
spittin inadequate linez causes the punishment of a capital crime
pffffttttt...this shit happenin to me maybe next time

Mad Dog 11-18-04 04:22 AM

Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Terumoto 11-18-04 04:45 AM

Voted For: M-Dog

I think that Mad Dog got this battle because he came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt MD got it they were used effectifely and were on point. Shift u shoulda been a bit more creative on this battle personals i felt werent that great, cos links are kinda wack. wordplay and creativity goes to Mad Dog and flow and structure i'll give to Mad Dog.

V/ M-Dog

La Cosa Nostra 11-18-04 04:48 AM

Voted For: M-Dog

Aiight, for starters, I think the punches were about the same. Both were decently worded, and hit correctly. However, I liked the way mad dog layed his shit out straight up. And I hate it when people use too many links. Heres a tip, when I read a battle. I dont nessecarily wanna click shitloads of links. So when I see punches like this:

spittin inadequate linez causes the punishment of a capital crime
pffffttttt...this shit happenin to me maybe next time

I think... Heh.. Like I can be bothered.
Other then that, I think M dog had some tite lines and good personals. It was a very close battle though.

K.ontroverz.Y 11-18-04 06:09 AM

Voted For: M-Dog

blah, this was an OK. battle right here

3rd shift. your shit was decent but lacked in vocab. good structure. and whats with those damn smilies.looks gay as hell.koo personals. but they didnt really hit hard. they didnt matter. M-dog's personal hit hard. Its a good thing too, cause he only has one. Your flow was koo. but Blah.

m-dog: shit was koo..better structure. and dope personals. vocab was blah. ok..good vet material here. i was feelin this fo sho. better flow. this was a koo verse

vote: m dog

Mad Dog 11-18-04 08:24 AM

Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

3rd-Shift 11-18-04 10:12 AM

uppin this shit right here.....lets get some real votes in this shit
peep the vocab an the links

Mad Dog 11-18-04 10:22 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 3rd-Shift
uppin this shit right here.....lets get some real votes in this shit
peep the vocab an the links


I didn't imagine those 3 votes above...they seem real to me...

3rd-Shift 11-18-04 10:26 AM

REAL votes=my votes
anything less is uncivilized.....
(old right guard commercial)
charles barkley line
get off my dicc....

Mad Dog 11-18-04 10:30 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 3rd-Shift
REAL votes=my votes
anything less is uncivilized.....
(old right guard commercial)
charles barkley line
get off my dicc....


It was you who dissed me on open mic and refused to let that shit sleep...and it was you who called me out...so hmm mm get off my dick :gfy:


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