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Fuck This Diss
now we got a bitch on the loose his name is wicked mad dogs toy boy and talks down at me like a thick head Well instead im'a put you clowns down quicky and easy them bitches are so retarded there at home watchin twennies See you think your a mc but your considerned as femcees both of you are trash you hit notes on the mic like the Bgs how in the heck do the rekon that you think of u can disrespect you've both sent mix tapes to industrys and you got a reject you seem to think your the players i'll rhymer sayer your words are absurd bitch your harming the ozone layer never denie that both of you guys have a big relationship you both get on wid fuckin shit u child molesters ya plain sick mad dog when i say sick I do not mean that ur sick in the head I mean your sick when raping your punk ass son in bed and shit that an't alright not to mention ur rhymes u bite think ya tight shit ya rhymes are worser den ur mums celulite think your both gangstas your only the worse hip hop disasters I fuck you both up faster and leave you broken wid the casters N sight fuck you to you wanna take this down wid our battles bitch is so fucked up he's not only gay but he's fuckin cammals he restricts himself from lookin at pussys covering dem up wid flannals All I gotta say about out break he's a dum bitch who's fake the guys so fat he's stuffin monster munch in his fat hoe face |
uhh yeah...whaddup?
sinner............................... you still slangin all these disses toiwards muh'fuckers? damn, okay.. it was pretty ass.....even for you, kid.. keep tryin tho n stepeth ya damn game up.. peace :) |
now we got a bitch on the loose his name is wicked
mad dogs toy boy and talks down at me like a thick head /\ No punch Well instead im'a put you clowns down quicky and easy them bitches are so retarded there at home watchin twennies /\ no punch again wtf??? See you think your a mc but your considerned as femcees both of you are trash you hit notes on the mic like the Bgs /\ weak punch and some femcees are dope... how in the heck do the rekon that you think of u can disrespect you've both sent mix tapes to industrys and you got a reject /\ that bar 1st line made no sense 2nd line weak again you seem to think your the players i'll rhymer sayer your words are absurd bitch your harming the ozone layer /\ 1st line blah 2nd line weak again never denie that both of you guys have a big relationship you both get on wid fuckin shit u child molesters ya plain sick /\ thats jus wrong how can u think that shit??? slight multi but the wrongness of that bar ruined it mad dog when i say sick I do not mean that ur sick in the head I mean your sick when raping your punk ass son in bed /\ Damn son u need help do you fantasise bout this or sumthin??? and shit that an't alright not to mention ur rhymes u bite think ya tight shit ya rhymes are worser den ur mums celulite /\ 1st line u need evidence otherwise its a fake personal and 2nd line again weak punch think your both gangstas your only the worse hip hop disasters I fuck you both up faster and leave you broken wid the casters /\ wow best bar...and still wasn't merking material N sight fuck you to you wanna take this down wid our battles bitch is so fucked up he's not only gay but he's fuckin cammals /\ senseless rhyme he restricts himself from lookin at pussys covering dem up wid flannals /\ 3 line rhymes suck...so this line is useless All I gotta say about out break he's a dum bitch who's fake the guys so fat he's stuffin monster munch in his fat hoe face /\ THIS IS YA CLOSER?!?...no comment Overall Feedback... It's nice to see you're making more ememies than you can already handle but the fact is despite being here for as long as you have...you still need major elevation ur flow and structure is the only thing going for you at the moment and your rhymes are at best pointless and the punches are elementary...seriously i hear kiddies like 5 y/o's sayin more up to date punches than what you produce...seriously Sinner the only thing you have improved on since your arrival onto RapVerse is your flow, structure and the fact that now you can rhyme...but you still need to make your rhymes make sense...this pointless rhyming isn't good at all and you need to quiten down because these people that you try and attempt to diss can murder you lyrically and vocally (audiowise)...unless you wanna prove me wrong?...if not then jus leave them alone it's a beef that ain't gonna help your reputation...in fact your probably only here because other people like to see the people you diss come back and screw you over lyrically...elevate...until then...quit with the disses...they are sensless out of 10...i'd give you a 4/10 just because of the flow and structure everything else needs attention to it. |
lmfao at this..dawg ur gettin there..better then before. but styll wack. keep tryin dawg u'll get there. LOL i dont like u but styll i have to show my business side rather then my personal beef
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and why do you have personal beef and that goes to all of you... ya don't even know me you cock sucker im only in it to rap and try and im only just doin my thing but u pussys don't respect that. Your personal fuckin beef got no concern on me cause I got a life and im better lookin den you are I got a gf and I an't a complete dick head like you alrite... word
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Dunno Wat All The Beef Is About But I Have To Say ,sinner.......u Should Learn To Take Constructive Criticism.that's All That Was.gss Gave U Just That.after His Feed They Should Have Just Closed This Thread Cause Ain't Much Else To Say;and Kontroverzey Put His Personal Problems Aside And Let U Know And U Still React Like A Three Year Old Fightin' For Attention.dude Grow Up.
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