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*Troop* vs Thesinnister
Battle Rules:
8-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0=KO\ U wanted me so u got me Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 11-19-04 at 02:37 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. WIn by 3-0 KO |
TheSinnister has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 02:38 AM.
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Aight.......
Yo Troop, Dude fuck your mentality, I use bare hands to a fatality, Your my newest casualty next days a tragedy, Professional Mercinary Set the corse and of course im runnin on stratigy// What do i gotta do 2 get respect, light you up quick, stick 6 in ya neck. Watchin this battle is like watchin faces of death, Quick Somebody change the channel! I say no names give no answers troop im comming for you quicker than cancer You trapped in a box rapped up faster than santa Where ever you go i shall shadowWatchin this battle is like watchin faces of death, Quick Somebody change the channel!// Bitch slapped and you got a new enimie Fake your death like pac just to conceal your idenity Wanna fight?, Bitch! COME GET ME Im your soul you'll never get rid of me This is my apitimy, Matter of fact dawg this is the begining of misery |
this battle is like watchin faces of death, Quick Somebody change the channel!//
used it twice on accident :( |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 05:10 AM.
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This Lightweights not from Brooklyn so no one knows your BlocksWidth Your Techniques Keep Missin the Key like a Vision Disabled LockSmith Punches get Misfondeld often like Catholic Choir Boys around the Minister Absolutely None of your Verbalistic Threats are thought of as near Sinnister New York Represenative you Couldnt Push Lyrix so they told you 2 TryWeight Loading 100% Pure Beef Patties onto your 757 and u still couldnt FlyWeight This battle is Considered Finished ya Need luck from the clover of Lil Flip You Exspect me to Give & show Respect to Someone who battles a Lil Skip All the damn personals explain them selves |
Fuck
This what it was ment to look like i wrote a line twice on accident
Aight....... Yo Troop, Dude fuck your mentality, I use bare hands to a fatality, Your my newest casualty next days a tragedy, Professional Mercinary Set the corse and of course im runnin on stratigy What do i gotta do 2 get respect, light you up quick, stick 6 in ya neck. I say no names give no answers troop im comming for you quicker than cancer You trapped in a box rapped up faster than santa Where ever you go i shall shadow Watchin this battle is like watchin faces of death, Quick Somebody change the channel! Bitch slapped and you got a new enemie Fake your death like pac just to conceal your idenity Wanna fight?, Bitch! COME GET ME!, Im your soul you'll never get rid of me This is my apitimy, Matter of fact dawg this is the begining of misery |
..............bumpin
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This was feedback posted for TheSinnister
checking something...................................
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Uppin this shit 4 some votes
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^^^
Uppin..>Can we get some votes please?........................................... ......
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bu,mp......................
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Voted For: *Troop*
Decent Battle But TheSinnister I wer'ent Feelin Ya... Troop-Had Good Personal's and Harder Punch's Than TS, the Structure also was more enjoyable to read because it was more compact, The Vocab was good and i think ya best line was the second Line. Overall 8/10 TheSinnister-Ya Verse looked like a pre written one since there was no personal' or hard Punch's, some of your verse was played but it was decent. You need to elevate on Punch's and Vocab Overall 4/10 V/Troop |
upppin..........
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helllooooo........
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