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InGage vs Tstorm
Battle Rules:
10 Lines only No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-19-04 at 01:01 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
InGage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 02:20 PM.
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T storm,i'll naturaly heat you the way your body keeps your pee warm//
Make you reform, Retreat! from my million killer bee swarm// I'm stormin castles, the way you stormin T// I should call you education the way you fuckin bornin me// Your fuckin shit,the way you postin verses// You'll be in the coffin while i'm coastin hearses// To the the fuckin morge// Think you'll hurt me, scince when did feelings hurt a cyborg// This is number nine i'm on my way to ten// Don't try to play that shakespear when you battle me again// |
Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 12:57 PM.
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gona see ya true whackness...soon as i submit this page
sayin ya shit stinks is a fact..coz u permanently en-gaged the song says, road is long...well for u it must be blinding u couldnt "cum hard" if u were a pedo..during child minding i cud drop dope lines...but from u theyd get no recognition ive seen more "spark"...coming from my cars faulty ignition God was wrong,..when he said "for everyone theres hope" shuffling cards, is the closest youll come to flippin a "joke" now theres no need to cry, chill..no need to get all irrate ya whack as hell, but going home..u guaranteed to elevate exp-last line..by elevate, i mean wen he go home he takin tha elevator.. dnt dig dnt vote |
Voted For: Tstorm
InGage T storm,i'll naturaly heat you the way your body keeps your pee warm// Make you reform, Retreat! from my million killer bee swarm// I'm stormin castles, the way you stormin T// I should call you education the way you fuckin bornin me// Your fuckin shit,the way you postin verses// You'll be in the coffin while i'm coastin hearses// To the the fuckin morge// Think you'll hurt me, scince when did feelings hurt a cyborg// This is number nine i'm on my way to ten// Don't try to play that shakespear when you battle me again// ^ Basically i couldn't make a structure out of that ya punches were weak some self-glory flow fu*ked and personals blah rhymes...not good at all seriously ur lucky ur new to this elevate and do it quick Tstorm gona see ya true whackness...soon as i submit this page sayin ya shit stinks is a fact..coz u permanently en-gaged ^ Nice opener good start the song says, road is long...well for u it must be blinding u couldnt "cum hard" if u were a pedo..during child minding ^ Punch is good but i don't agree wit that particular bar i cud drop dope lines...but from u theyd get no recognition ive seen more "spark"...coming from my cars faulty ignition ^ lol good punch God was wrong,..when he said "for everyone theres hope" shuffling cards, is the closest youll come to flippin a "joke" ^ Lol another good punch again now theres no need to cry, chill..no need to get all irrate ya whack as hell, but going home..u guaranteed to elevate ^ lol @ the closer good again Overall Tstorm...why did you even try you had some real dope flow and structure was on point to the max punches were dope some good personals good metas and wordplay was on point too...InGage seriously u need to elevate before battlin again try to seperate your bars to make it look clearer and lose the // it's mad newb also u need to work on ya vocab but you got beat easily today... RTF in ma sig as the post limit in my battle is too high V/Tstorm |
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Voted For: Tstorm
Sup both come hott in this battle In started well but kinda flitered out during the last two or three barz... T was consistant in his whole verse. Best bar but T.. gona see ya true whackness...soon as i submit this page sayin ya shit stinks is a fact..coz u permanently en-gaged ^Opener dope punch, nice vocab hard hitting personal... In's best bar... I'm stormin castles, the way you stormin T// I should call you education the way you fuckin bornin me// ^Nice punch ok personal. Vote ~ T |
Voted For: Tstorm
Tstorm took this battle tstorm u had sum nice punches there...tha closer came out on this one...tha structure was in place...tha flow was pretty decent..vocab was aight..and u had sum persona's up in there overall u had a pretty decent drop tho... ingage...i dont kno what kinda drop was that but all u need to do is elevate more tho RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161125 |
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Will Return Those Ma Fukin Favs!!!!!!1..... |
Sup T RTF with an honest vote on one of my battles..
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Voted For: Tstorm
hahahahahhahahah the aight verse in a long timeeee.........the song says, road is long...well for u it must be blinding u couldnt "cum hard" if u were a pedo..during child minding ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6 the funniest shit in a long time hahahah gud flow and structure had sum hard punches kame bak wif a gud conclusion |
thanx 4 tha props...........
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Voted For: Tstorm
V/Tstorm.....punchs were good an his flowed good he dissed ingage in ever line he gets my vote......Ingage u had sum flow but u didnt come hard with tha punchs .......V/Tstorm *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
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