The Harvest of the weak
 

Yo/I''ll plague you with my bubonic tonic
I'LL start to spit ebonic phonix
that hits the streets like hydroponic chronic
connect like electronic economics
make ya shake from my sonic techtonics
lyrically I''m johnny pneumonic
and upon completion i began unleashing a venomous secretion
on any rapper that wanted to start critiquing
have your brain fluid leaking and your nervous system tweaking
you begin weakening
as soon as I grip the mic
I spit so nice I''ll rip ya twice and still have time to strip your ice
that''s why they call me SADISTIC
firing Ballistics hot enough to light up the torch at the Olympics
Armed with the pimpist linguistics
and a style harder to read then heiroglyphics
so get with this
you continue to bring your hate
I''ll decimate your unsafe fate make your ice liquidate
and your brain sedate I predetate on any mc that spits whack verses
got lyricall black hearses and overstaffed nurses I spit mad curses
when I get pissed send fire from my fist like an Arsonist
make your shit twist into contorted positions under any condition
I beat my opposition into submission
have weak rhymers drowning on there lyricall christening
I begin chipping away at stone structures
so tight you won''t find no punctures
I function like a continuous conjunction
readily firing with electromagnetic wiring
got me spitting 16 bars without tiring
no lyingyou try deciphering
I''ll have your brain frying NO DOUBT-MY SKILL IS DEATH DEFYING

Damn...................this Is The Absolute Most Incredible Drop I've Ever Seen.good Everything......
Vocab,structure,flow..........flawless.100/100

Uppn-------------------

It was aight vocab was good structure could be improved, flow was aight...i'd give it 7/10 keep em comin...oh yea rtf on my open mic :thumbup:

honestly this sucked. no structure, horribly played lines, dumb ass rhyme scheme you didn't say anything just a bunch of words strung together in some forum, besides the flow sucks. Get kids off your dick and they'll tell you the same.

Its Aiiiiiiight Nuttin Special In My Eyes


Flow Is Kinda Chopped Up
Vocab Needs A Liil Work
Stretch Cha Lines A Lil Bit But Dont Ova Do It

Mutli'z I Sense It

But Either Than This Could've Been Betta Ice Pick

7/10

Drop An Honest Feedback In My Open Mic

"diss To This Kid At Skool-smoke"

I'll Preciate The Honest Feed



This Could Improved