~~paraphrased Revelations~~
 

this is the book of revelations paraphrased in the New Kid Ice
Version........hope you enjoy it.......

sorry for the format, i will edit later






we enter the mind in JOHN'S VISION of SPAWNED WISDOM that GOD GIVES HIM//
first he gets the word to GREET THE CHURCHES and expose problems that EXCEED THE SURFACE//
he writes to the church thats LOVELESS, sayin their LOVE IS strayin from the one ABOVE US//
then to the church thats PERSECUTED reminding them of God's WORKS THROUGH THEM an that it HURTS TO DO IT//
next, to the church of COMPROMISE cause they made God's decisions based UPON THEIR EYES//
he also wrote to the church of CORRUPTION who TOOK UP SIN dissed God, and no longer DISCUSSED HIM//
even the CHURCH OF THE DEAD were reminded of the WORDS HE HAD SAID and to REPENT//
sixth was the church of the FAITHFUL who recieved a FACEFULL of encouragement in seeking the MAIN GOAL//
and last was the church of the LUKEWARM who God vomits out, cause they left him TOO TORN//
then the vision makes a WHOLE TURN into the THROWN ROOM where Johns mind was THROWN IN//
true worship was SHOWN IN this place, it is constant....no one will ever PHONE IN//
then the SCROLLS UNROLLIN the lamb who was slain is the only one who paid the TOLL TO HOLD IT//
and DESPITE THE SQUEALS the giver of all LIFE IS REVEALED
with the opening of the seven SEALS//
and sounding of seven TRUMPETS an Satans SLUMP GETS worse, when outta Heaven is where God BUMPED HIM//
then arise the BEASTS of earth and first the SEAS who speak BLASPHEMYS//
next no LESS OR MORE THAN one hundred an FOURTY FOUR GRAND stood with and FOR HIM(God)//
an soon out pour the BOWLS OF JUDGEMENT first lothesome sores, second the SEAS TURN BLOOD RED//
third shows the rivvers and springs of BLOODSHED but lets move on....thats ENOUGHSAID//
but the bowl of the FOURTH IS poured out upon the sun and men are SCORCHED KID//
the fifth brings the DARKNESS AND PAIN and still mindsets of unbelief and the HEARTLESS REMAIN//
sixth all the water of Euphrates on EARTH WAS TAKEN an seventh the EARTH WAS SHAKEN//
next the luxuries of the earth were OVERTAKEN....Babylon falls, the LORD IS REIGNIN//
then SATAN IS BOUND while the SAINTS WILL SURROUND, Jesus, for the years of a THOUSAND//
the satanistic REBELLION IS CRUSHED while JUDGEMENT IS THRUST uopn those who didnt chose JESUS' TRUST//
then all things were MADE NEW, Jesus will come back quickly...I'm ready...you SAVED TOO?//

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