give me some feed back on dis yall
 

when they come and run they mouth they CAINT B REAL,
they talk shit,try n fight,and try to MAKE ME DEALS,
i spread threw ya veins like a poisonous VIRUS,
da only time i run is when i here them SIRENS,
but i bet yo ass is gon when i kick down the DOOR,
have yo gurl screamin runnin when she see yo blood on da FLOOR,
have u throwin up like 8 mile...u no MASHALL MATHERS,
u think u sumthin boy i been through....HARSHER MATTAS,
when u come round ill kill u mayne,i wont put u in no CAGE,
cause u no im givin u a chance to see my venoum of RAGE,
got all these hata's hatin cause they MAD ITS HOTT,
but ill have u standin on edge,like some STATIC SHOCK,
when i walk up though,u no thurr aint no ARMS,
but ill have yall crazy like some runnin SWARMS,
dis is my last bar be for its ENDED,
so dont try n fight,cause u no ill END IT

Ey Come On Yall Give Me Some Ma Fuckin Feedback
Come On Yall Wake Up