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these are the first 2 verses of "Till I no longer speak" just postin for feedback.

until i die ill come back.
ill never leave rap.
hear a statement keep that.
ill never speak whack.
thats fact.
you gettin black.
balled.
out called.
lyrically mauled.
dumped off stage phisically hauled.
you heard me, ill never quit.
youll never sieze my spit.
till me knees get clipped.
and my speech gets ripped.
you can eat my shyt.
kause im done with you.
had my fun with you.
constantly runnin you.
pull a gun on who.
mother fucker your empty.
tried to break when you bent me.
your own crew sent me.
to end thee.
thought you spent me.
bitch your wrong.
sumthin youll find out by the end of this song.
whev every verse.
gets worse.
and your styles reversed.
chances increased for a nurse.
pulled up next to a hurse.
all evidence dispurced.
mix that with a curse.
now tell me who hurts.
im a rapper, theres perks.
able to rise above these jerks.
and take over these clerks.
whatever works.
i'll do anything it takes.
no matter the stakes.
whatever i want i make.
punk bitch your fake.
youll never step to this.
cant challenge the invent of this.
gettin down on your knees.
beggin me please!
as if you had a chance to repent from this.

til i no longer speek.
im forever unique.
you contantly hear it.
your ryhmes stay weak.
and you constantly fear it.
til i no longer speak.
enjoy my new leak.
a new type of lyric.
sumthin you want to keep.
every time you come near it.
til i no longer speak.

second round.
of BLANK sound.
rise out the ground.
when beat pound.
come see what weve found.
composin each noun.
for rebound.
lets kreep down.
and watch me hound.
an unspeakable thought.
combined with unteachable taught.
weather you like it or not.
each lines gunna be hot.
bring it? bitch its been brought.
lets see what youve got.
each shell of each shot.
will never permit you.
to find my borders and get through.
thats right. i will never forget you.
forever remember the way you spit too.
each time your gettin snuck.
you suck.
fe fi fo fuck.
ive heard enough.
ready to lock you up.
throw out the key.
mother fucker you cant be me.
and once you see.
that fact then we.
can devise a plan.
involvin mic and hand.
fuck your clan.
were goin man to man.
this is wound to sand.
you wont be able to take this.
every time you fake spits.
and i continue to make hits.
you say you load clips.
when you rode dicks.
your broke bitch.
you should write this down for real.
some more lines to steal.
kause im on the verge of gettin a deal.
BLANK MAN better believe the hype is real.

til i no longer speek.
im forever unique.
you contantly hear it.
your ryhmes stay weak.
and you constantly fear it.
til i no longer speak.
enjoy my new leak.
a new type of lyric.
sumthin you want to keep.
every time you come near it.
til i no longer speak.

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