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Ysdat 11-19-04 05:14 PM

~take it how you want~
 
This is for those weak thought's dead like a bleak corpse.
the seat brought a distort vision, but claiming number1 wasnt a thought decision.
had a vision of a mad devision im glad they liven so now it's a provision
obserd claim's of nerd's fame, while i toy with you herb's game
so many alias's and account's you proberly on your 3rd name
so many dont take responsibilty cant count the number of time's i have heard blame.
I got my own style so you can label me a proviniance
allway's down to help other's and give advice,so label me a conveniance
cause rv hardly could harm me, my lyrical artilerly is full so dont try disarm me
Im a soldier in the council army so be prepard for war.
but let me remind you It's only lyric's..why you sitting there scard you whore?.
I aint riding with you so why you talking about a takeover
The only way you could do that is with a lyrical makover
call me rv's saviour..cause im here with the spirtual rakeover
........................

yo let me get simple for all you small minded fuck's out there.


Did you think I would just sit back and let you win.
You never thought that going against me is a direct sin
you next in line to try rec my mind,dont try inspect my kind
cause we one of a type,You so fake I make fun of you hype
talking crazy and claiming outrages thing's,
take a closer look and see what our page's bring
this is str8 keystyle so I wont even name this thing
this is for the real but Im aware that the lame listening
I belive in god,but never had a christening.
my rhyme's stir more shit up than a tornado does.
while your still amature,like you still on that playdoe buzz.
........
what muther fucker's.
"fi-del"

intensify effect 11-19-04 05:16 PM

hahaha i was feeling this.....

not a bad drop... 8.0 keep'em coming....

Ysdat 11-19-04 06:04 PM

thnx for the feed.

up

4Blood2Hound0 11-19-04 08:16 PM

pretty nice... some lines were a little stretched but it was overall good, 7.5/10

Ysdat 11-19-04 09:45 PM

thnx for the feed

up

Ysdat 11-20-04 04:28 AM

up^^^feed will be repayed

Implicit 11-20-04 04:29 AM

ayo fam that was hot............

........some of the lines were a little streched out like the first couple...........

............u had a lot of multis in it which helped the flow.............

.......ur vocab was pretty good too...............

PayDay 11-20-04 10:59 AM

yo man...i was feelin this...tight shit...your first few lines were a lil bit streched, could minimize that a lil bit...the rest of it, flowed well...good vocab, multies...which helped with the flow a whole lot...nice drop fam...8/10...keep them coming

streetryda 11-20-04 11:40 AM

nice drop fi-del i expect nothing less since i know ur skill this was full of vocab and flow was pretty nice man keep it up.....and stretched lines aint shit when its an OM....

EastCoast 11-20-04 03:08 PM

liked it 7.5 or 8/10......some of the lines was stretched .....good flow vocab and concept....keep droopin em'

Ysdat 11-20-04 07:47 PM

thnx for the feed,

up^


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