(~*~Dj KiD~*~) vs Reloaded
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-19-04 at 05:46 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

(~*~Dj KiD~*~) has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 05:18 PM.

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 05:22 PM.

yo checking in. prepare to get merked bitch and you better post a verse too. calling me out nothing.

yo this lil bitch calling me out and just dont know
what kind of music does he "DJ"?Old McDonald

this newb is like a cold and i got a little cough
he says he is from "in my bed" does he jack off

ill have this nigga body "ripping" more than his avatar
bitch stepping to anyone and spitting self glorification shit wont get you far

upping for some votes...............

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hey yo we all know that this lil bitch got merked. upping for some votes........

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Voted For: Reloaded

Reloaded - iight verse your flow was good and you had some good punches.

Best Line - this newb is like a cold and i got a little cough
he says he is from "in my bed" does he jack off

Worst Line - yo this lil bitch calling me out and just dont know
what kind of music does he "DJ"?Old McDonald

Dj-KiD-> iight verse, your flow was on target but you didnt really have a good punch.

Best Line - picking a name like reloaded ur gonna get shot
man u weak get knocked out by the pot damn ass thinking u hot

Worst Line - reloaded u reload ya pellit gun fucked it is like ur mum
wankin yaself thinkin ur gunna cum man ur fuckin dumb


OVERALL - This battle was close, both are on the same level but I have to give the vote to someone so Reloaded gets mine. He had the better PUNCH in the battle. DJ work on some punches that aint gotta do wit being gay and fuckin your mom.

Vote - Reloaded

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Voted For: Reloaded

Okay I really wasn't feeling this battle... close one for your skill levels but still I wasn't really impressed by much.

Now first of all... Imma be blunt and tell you reloaded won this.

but heres the breakdown

Vocab - Tie... neither of you used much vocab... it was all very very simple
Punches - Reloaded, main reason you won. It wasn't good, but it was better than DJs. DJ your stuff has been played out majorly man...
Personals - No one... there was absolutely no sense of personals at all in this battle.
Structure - DJ, you had better structure. Reloaded you stretched a line there at the end, but you don't have too bad of structure.
Metas/Wordplay - tie, all simple.

Pretty much you both need to elevate. Good luck in the future.

thanks. upping for some more votes.