Me
 

young to tha c
10 years in tha game and im still tha sickest
beat boys bad in battles just call me vicious
my floes like stuck up girls they hard to get wit
im like diplomas in tha hood its hard to get this
i spit and these bois get happy like girl in the barby doll isle at toys r us and i aint my fault yall cant get my im just dan gerous
reppin killa city all the way to tha fullest
aw you loyal to ya click then take this lyrical bullit
i done spit for bars and they aint said shit
all i can say now is wat crew yall want me wit

not to bad. try getting more tech with your rhyme's, structuring it better and using more multi's
keep dropping and elevating
return the feed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161070

ok good lookin out