jjflowsum_5 vs ~LIL'DREW~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-20-04 at 07:11 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

JJFLOWSUM_5 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 07:28 PM.

ill put u bac down,ill put u in plastic surgrey,
have u gon runnin when u beggin for mercy,-50
sticken wit one decision yet u have a change of heart,
backin down from a battle but u claim u hard,
dont no wat to do and yo gurl dont no how to handle dis dick,
and im on da formattel of battle when i battle dis trick,
cause i accepted dis battle,and im gon beat it,
so quit frontin trick and quit bein conseded,
juss some friendly competition,when im dishin out da pain,
lil drew on da front and his games da same,

yo no hard feelins u no..no hate....holla

~LIL'DREW~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-04 06:28 PM.

the demons r back..........................call it return a da devil/
cause even if u were some stairs u wouldnt "reach my level"/
dis cat claims his rhymes r dope, and his flows r hard as brick/
i could inject his pen wit smallpox and his verse still wont be sik/
i could bury u wit a steak...den da beef would neva cease/
den give u two of my fingas so u could finally "REST IN PEACE"/(*1)
cant no1 match my skills...............cause i lyrically kill foes/
and even if u swallowed acid rain, u wouldnt spit an ill flow/

*1) a peace sign (index finger, and middle finger)

uppin dis battle...its just some friendly shit...we still both holdin it down fo da LOU...

STLIENs fo life..............................

ey yall feed back please!!!wake up yall
be honest...holla

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Voted For: ~LIL'DREW~

To Tell You The Truth I Read His First Bar And Said He Took This..

This IS How I Broke It Down..

Punches : Lil Drew
Personals : Lil Drew


Thats How I Base Battles On, And Lil Drew Took This..

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This was feedback posted for ~LIL'DREW~
 

checking dem polls...................................

Voted For: ~LIL'DREW~

LOL Aii Mayne Look This Was a Str8 Slaughter lil drew mayne you Got This I mean Look At Ya Verse mayne Those Punches OMG i was luaghin Bcuz very Bar Had A punch No offense iiflowsum_5 But you shouldve step up ya game b4 ya battled the cat i mean wow i think you Were on your off game Werent you? yeah well n E ways Yall got my vote so ill check ya lata

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A Yall Plz Return The favor and Vote in My Battlez I Only Have two and their Rii At the End all Thats neede is like 2 to 3 votes but um Yall Plz Return the favor it would b the right thing to do and I would really appreciate it afta I took The time to vote N Ya BAttles It Would B Rii
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Voted For: ~LIL'DREW~

Dizzam, aight Lil Drew took this one hands down...the flow was better, the structure was a little bit off, he had better punches, metas, the creativity was WAY better....lemme break it down for you...

IP:


the demons r back..........................call it return a da devil/
cause even if u were some stairs u wouldnt "reach my level"/
(THE FIRST LINE WAS PLAYED, BUT THE OVERALL CONCEPT WAS GOOD...7/10)

dis cat claims his rhymes r dope, and his flows r hard as brick/
i could inject his pen wit smallpox and his verse still wont be sik/ (NICE PUNCH, HIT DEAD ON...CREATIVE...8/10)

i could bury u wit a steak...den da beef would neva cease/
den give u two of my fingas so u could finally "REST IN PEACE"/(*1)
(HAHA, NOT SURE IF THAT COULD HAPPEN, BUT FUNNY AS SHIT)

cant no1 match my skills...............cause i lyrically kill foes/
and even if u swallowed acid rain, u wouldnt spit an ill flow/
(SIK LINE, ITS SIMPLE, BUT U GOT HIM WIT THAT...8/10)

(LIL DREW)
drew had tight flow, and concept...his topics werent commercial and werent played out... thats y he gets my vote...it was just better...and let me break down jjs' verse...

ill put u bac down,ill put u in plastic surgrey,
have u gon runnin when u beggin for mercy,-50
(NO OFFENSE, BUT SO PLAYED...NO CREATIVITY...4/10)

sticken wit one decision yet u have a change of heart,
backin down from a battle but u claim u hard,
(THIS ISNT 2 BAD, BUT NOTGOOD ENOUGH 2 B EFFECTIVE, 5/10)

dont no wat to do and yo gurl dont no how to handle dis dick,
and im on da formattel of battle when i battle dis trick,
(THIS LINE RHYMES WELL, BUT THE CONCEPT SEEMS WACK...BUT FUNNY SO 6/10)

cause i accepted dis battle,and im gon beat it,
so quit frontin trick and quit bein conseded,
(IF YOU READ URE VERSE, THIS IS JUST A REPEAT OF ANOTHER LINE, JUST RE-WORDED I THINK...MY OPINION, AND ITS 2 PLAIN 4/10)

juss some friendly competition,when im dishin out da pain,
lil drew on da front and his games da same,
(PLAIN END BAR...NEEDS 2 B MORE RAW...MORE CREATIVE, 4/10)

(JJFLOWSUM_5)
AIGHT MAN, NO HATE, BUT YOU JUST HAVE 2 DIG DEEPER IN YA HEAD MAN...U GOT SOME SKILL, AND FLOW, JUST TRY A LITTLE HARDER...NAH MEAN...IF YOU ELEVATE SOME, U WILL B AIGHT...~1~