Quick Free...........help!!!
 

this jus a quick free....

.....my first ever...........

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/baskinrobinsmusic.htm

damn turn ya vocals up...add some type of emotion to ya shit too....lyrics i couldnt really hear witout blastin the beat...so work on that man...

agreed and leave 2 links you have given feedback on

o damn its not loud enough...........

......alright and it was early so i couldnt really put no emotion into it.........

..........but thanks for the feed.....

i gave feedback on calamity's freestyle and x-spitty...

*listening*

Turn up the vocals. Flow was ok, but you need to put a little more emotion in your shit. Wow....that's it? LOL. Anyway, it didn't sound that bad, just turn your vocals up and write some shit down so you can actually spit something with emotion :thumbup:

alright but that was a free so i couldnt really put a lot of emotion into it anyway.......

for most emcee's if not all... freestyle is where there true emotion, flow, and so on shows.. lyrics might not be as ill as written though...

and yeah turn ya shit up... and spit a free when everythings clear and aint gotta worry bout nothing...and u can go all out...

alright thanks for the advice.....................

uppin for more feed.....................

anyone else with advice?...........

any more feed?..........................

Yea true turn up ya volume....but yea overall it was ok....nuttin too special....keep it up tho...pzz ~1~

~FLOW~
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7/10
~Emotion~
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6/10
~Enjoyment~
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7/10
~Vocab~
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7/10

Yo But keep it up
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since i gave u some feed hit me back

alright thanks man.................