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RICH-Nytch 11-20-04 08:27 PM

Real Shit
 
Every time I flip my phone, i know its got to be one of my hoes
calling to tell me how my moneys going,
all i tell dem de betta not leave a nigga dick alone,
and keep up da good work while you getting bone,
Ha hearts racing while using ha mouth,
ha favorite thing to do is just go down south,
and shes trying ha hardest not to choke,
Iam gansta ! like dat nigga from GTA San Andreas also known as O G LOC,
ifa nigga come at you wit his nine dont take four seconds to breathe,
dont take ya time, so think fast cuz you got da count to three,
and dis rap is hot like fia,
bow down and listen to da new king RICH-Nytch also known as tha ma sia.

(IAM NOT GAY FROM OG PART FROM GTA)

E_Zilla ™ 11-20-04 10:10 PM

nice ass shit man 10 /10

Kawn Flixx 11-20-04 10:10 PM

LMFAO!!

this shit is fnny as hell

overall its like a 6/10
but sicne its funny you get 7/10

shit this funny

¤_M_DuB_¤ 11-22-04 07:28 AM

u wack ass nigga
 
itz az easy as 1 , 2 , 3... u aint no fuckin MC...uz a clown...come round my town...ill show u how to get layed down...6 ft in tha dirt...quick shot to tha head will neva hurt......fuck wit me n itz definate u will get murked...

nigga i push figurez...u nickle n dimin
quit da bullshit u aint big tymin

dey call me da new kid on da block...
thuggin...nigga i keepz da glock...
nd n my sock..
i got da creamy colored rock...
dat i sell to ya momz n popz...pussy

m dub...get at me nigga...... :nono:

Mad Dog 11-22-04 07:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ¤_M_DuB_¤
itz az easy as 1 , 2 , 3... u aint no fuckin MC...uz a clown...come round my town...ill show u how to get layed down...6 ft in tha dirt...quick shot to tha head will neva hurt......fuck wit me n itz definate u will get murked...

nigga i push figurez...u nickle n dimin
quit da bullshit u aint big tymin

dey call me da new kid on da block...
thuggin...nigga i keepz da glock...
nd n my sock..
i got da creamy colored rock...
dat i sell to ya momz n popz...pussy

m dub...get at me nigga...... :nono:


*tut tut tut* i can see ur gonna gewt whored like mad keepin that attitude...lose it...now...

and um aight piece but not special and it didn't make me laugh...5.5/10 need more wordplay/imagery and a better structure flow was good though


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