ContagiousVenomz vs Chaos
 

Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-24-04 at 03:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

ContagiousVenomz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 04:29 PM.

Man do you exept this battle..or wut..don't be scared Now

INTRO

Go grab you team, now “THEY-LOSS”…
When you feel dem red beams, I did it, just for a little “CHAOS”…


"CRUCIFY" C "TESTICLES" , "CROSS" your FORMED-WORDS to "X-SPELL" your "MASCULINITY" when I "CAST-TRAITS"--
..Hand you a 20 piece Dinner-Set to your "CHEST" then turn ITALIAN practicing tradition and smash your “BREAST-PLATE”--
With weak “CODE” of conduct, Chaos’S “CRACKED” … “FORNICATES-with-his-RECORD-collection” for him to be “LAYIN-IN-THE-CUT” through a weak scratch…..This disgruntled “KID” fail to diss- “PLAY” any “HIGH-LIGHTS” in a “DOPE-MATCH”--
..This Vagina professional female escort get struck deep like dicks-in-hoe'....with ya “Nasal” glands to my “Pelvis” , you coming out unscathed? who the “FUCK-NOSE”--
Chaos you fag, CV Violently pierce “BICS” perforating your “PENIS” then wrench out your genitals to remove you’re “A-PEN-DICKS”--
this ‘Chick’ getting Fucked by the “LEBIA” bruising ya “VULVA” ~ the only occasion when ya “LIPS” are “FLAPPIN”--
RIP your GUTS from BEHIND-Damage your SPINE Brain inserted C4’s between your two-states of being, so OUT-THINKIN ME?? "Never-MIND".--
..Snatch your throat stick your LARYNX to TREES you can find Chaos in these “NECK-of-the-WOODS” ….tear out your “PENILE-GLANDS” throw it in the “BACK-of-JUMPERS” for you to be a “BOY-in-the-HOOD”-- ….

[..LETS GET PERSONAL SHALL WE..]

PUNCH Chaos out the GAME to “KNOCK YOUR HUSTLE” …..I use mere “WATER-EXCRETION” to rip ya flesh when I “TEAR” out your muscles…--
ContagiousVenomz is-COOL and COLLECTIVE when it comes to TALKS of FAI~even if u were a "100,000 pound penguin" u still Couldnt BREAK-THA-ICE(lol)--
..PUT you in tha "MINOR LEAGUES" & Treat Him Like An "OBSOLETE PLAYER"Cant HANG with tha "PROS" cuz "C" hasnt IMPROVED since "PRODIGIKAL PRAYERS" (ouch!)--
Chaos a 'PRODIGY'-How Can That BE? He's in his 'MID-TWENTYS' with a 'BABY & a FAMILY'~At age 17 I'm 'LEGENDARY'-Dont 'STRAIN that' NECK' cuz YOu OBVIOUSLY LOOK UP TO ME!--




ContagiousVenomz 'FLOWS' are 'TREACHEROUS' like tha 'FALLS of NIAGRA'~Chaos couldnt 'RISE' to tha CHALLENGE, so i INJECTED this "GRANDPA's' scripts with a dose of "VIAGRA"--
Steal the Hearts of Crowds like Kleptomaniacs on Valentines Day
A.I’s last 'MEMORABLE' battle? still UNFOUND to this DAY! (oooh!)
Spit 'TERRORIST' tactics causing malphunction in tha 'BRAIN'
Mix The -'FUTURE' with 'CURRENT EVENTS' cuz I 'PREDICT' Chaos would share tha'FATE' of UDAY & QUDAY HUSSEIN--
Arteries and Bones Snappin~Lyrikal Prodigy is ILL? NOT Happenin! IGNORE tha RANKING' cuz tha FACT is ~A.I's GREATEST ACCOMPLISHMENT is would be BECOMING 'ADMIN'..so Why FOOL Yourself? Drop tha MIC son and quit RAPPIN!-- (R.I.P)

yo....vote on this please before we battle...i'll holla back with a fava......thanks
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161337

Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 03:49 PM.

yo,contagious
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You Couldn't Have Contagious-Venomz If My Style Was In Ya Verse!.....
I'll Rip All Your Organs Out- And Replace Your Blood Stream With Venom To Ruin Ya Blood-Course....
Take A Infected-HIV Needle And Stab Your Head Untill You Bleed To Death.....
And Beat Your Dead Corpse-Untill The Cops Come And Arrest Me For "Abusing A Dead Body"And Resist Arrest!!.....
Your Style Is Weak-Your A Starter-Your Just A Front Office Solder.....
AI Doesn't Want You-You Trying Out And Making It-Is Like Randy Moss Going To The Chargers!!....
Bloods Up And Crips Down?You Ain't NO Blood You Just A Pussy Nigga That Never Made It.....
I'll Dislocate-Ya Arm-Replace It-With Robotic-Replacement...And
Snatch Out Ya Eyes-And Use A Rusty Nail-For Ya Face-Lift!!!.......
I'ma Risk Of Serious Injury To Hands And Other Joints!....
I'll Cut Ya Fingers Off-So You Can Only Rock The Mic-When SomeBody Writes Ya VERSE!!!!.....
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Blah!!....i kinda rushed it but..whatever...the personals are there...if you don't understand them don't vote please.....uppin for votes...[/color]

yo,contagious
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You Couldn't Have Contagious-Venomz If My Style Was In Ya Verse!.....
I'll Rip All Your Organs Out- And Replace Your Blood Stream With Venom To Ruin Ya Blood-Course....
Take A Infected-HIV Needle And Stab Your Head Untill You Bleed To Death.....
And Beat Your Dead Corpse-Untill The Cops Come And Arrest Me For "Abusing A Dead Body"And Resist Arrest!!.....
Your Style Is Weak-Your A Starter-Your Just A Front Office Solder.....
AI Doesn't Want You-You Trying Out And Making It-Is Like Randy Moss Going To The Chargers!!....
Bloods Up And Crips Down?You Ain't NO Blood You Just A Pussy Nigga That Never Made It.....
I'll Dislocate-Ya Arm-Replace It-With Robotic-Replacement...And
Snatch Out Ya Eyes-And Use A Rusty Nail-For Ya Face-Lift!!!.......
I'ma Risk Of Serious Injury To Hands And Other Joints!....
I'll Cut Ya Fingers Off-So You Can Only Rock The Mic-When SomeBody Writes Ya VERSE!!!!.....
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Blah!!....i kinda rushed it but..whatever...the personals are there...if you don't understand them don't vote please.....uppin for votes...[

Voted For: Chaos

I think that Chaos got this battle because i feel that Chaos came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Chaos got it they were used effectifely and were on point CV u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Chaos good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Chaos and flow and structure i'll give to Chaos.

V/Chaos There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly

Voted For: Chaos

My vote goes to Chaos...let me explain...

First of all, ContagiousVenomz, when i looked at your verse, i didn't feel like reading it at first, the structure with all those words in caps: FIX THAT! It's not fun to read! You had some nice punches in there but since you wrote such a long verse, i expect everything to be hot and that wasn't the case. When someone drops a long verse, i see it as: wow, they worked on it and they wanted to show us all these lines cause they're so dope. But you don't have that here. Some lines didn't make sense at all according to me and the flow was off at times but those personals and punches came pretty hard here and there.

Chaos : still that text colour, fix it! Lolz...i've seen a lot better from you to be honest, your flow and vocab were okay as usual. Wordplay could've been better and it could've used more hardhitting personals but you had some nice stuff in there actually. You kept it nice and simple, was easier to read. I liked the HIV-line (people, look at the other one's nickname and connect the two to get it...). I expect a better drop from you but you still won in my opinion.

Voted For: Chaos

my vote has to go to ---chaos
Chaso has a better vocb. and structure here. I have to give him a 9/10 and the other guy a 7/10! Really the other guys didn't make any sense