Updated Philosipher Diss
 

aight yall, before i got a lot of people tellin me to put more emotion and shit in so i did. here it is, the RERECORDED PHILOSIPHER DISS. hope you like this one better....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wickedclownmusic.htm

work on flow and emotion........but mainly flow

did u even listen to the nrw one newmethod?

nice wicked....atleas we can hear the lyrics...if you wanna collab once PM me...and why dont you have the Da Rip officiel Sig in your signature

merked ?... dont say that ever a again.. u sounded so fake LOL... wow..


ok.. now..

flow was horrible.. and ya lyrics were pretty simple.. for a first drop im takin it.. quality was good, except when u clipped.. work on your flow and matching the snares... word.. just keep droppin an tryna elevate.. you'll get there..

im jsut tryin to give constructive criticism........just like calam.......

Quality is dope is quite clear...vocally u could up the emotion and flow could be improved...some punches were aight a lotta fucks in there lol...so lyrics could be upped but yea for a 1st drop this was a good attempt jus keep them comin and u'll elevate naturally :thumbup:

not feeling this at all man i could swear i gave feedback on this already work on ya flow and delivery it sounds like your talking over the beat keep elevating is all i got to say -peace-

yeh jus emotion and flow needs work thats it..