KahnShienz vs hang-man
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-24-04 at 11:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Whats With All This Check In And Accept Battle Shit?

KahnShienz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 11:54 PM.

Whats Up Wit ALl This Shit.. SOmebody Explain It To Me..

hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-22-04 12:02 AM.

u got 15 min to drop ya verse in the same box u check'in

post ya verse same box u check'ed in due in 15 or u will lose

u weak fuck get buck'ed face tucked unda the seat
beat ya down till ya style quits N forever decese
im the lyrical beast bless'in ya chest like a prist
never da lease i reless anger N bang-ya with a 2by4 N permanitly put u to sleep
if i strech my bar its cuz u'r a meal thats ready to get
(w)raped up
put da 4's to ya nostilas so u nose u gonna get blasted-up
freestyle only take sec u take a life time befor comein up with a tight-line
bit-mines N whind up with ya teeth broken bearly holding on to ya life-line
take ya N burn ya to ash then smoke ya on the air-plain to really be high
my flow like weed-smokers at 10, gonna keep burnin till i die

freestyle

Ayo



I Grasp Hang Man, And Slice-His-Neck
And Put My *Nike's To His Dome* To Get His *Mind IN Check* =-
His Time-Is-Wrecked, Theres A New Kid On-The-Boards
Cause Kahn Come Wit A *Round Of Applause* To *Clap* At-This-Whore =-
Your Whole Styles-A-Bore, You Cant Take Kahn Out-Of-A-Battle
Cause I Got This *Baby Lookin Moist* Like He *Masterbating Wit Rattles* =-

Ya Whole Shirt-Is-Wet, How You Gonna Let Them Hollows-Hit-You
Shoot Quick And-DisMiss-You
Cause I *Grip More Nines* than *Freshman Grudges In School* =-
Fuck I-Really-Pitty-You, Cause My Punches Always-Land
And Sink Quick In Ya Chest Like Quicksand
Cause Like *KKK On Blacks* Now You Really *A HUng Man* =-
You Really A-Dumb-Man, Even Awnsering Was-A-Catastrophy
This Verse Will Cost-You-B
Cause I Got You *Hanging On My Words* Like *Apostrophys* =-

Voted For: KahnShienz

KahnShienz
get rid of the fucking...... **~~``--
you only use them to show the reader were your punch is..... we are not dumb you ass... a real good punch should be easy to understand without having to point it out... if it needs to be pointed out..... do it in bold!!

theres some advice for next time.....

well i see your new so i apolgies for being harshe..... but take this feedback ito you mind and think abut it.... peace

Aight No Doubt.. My bad On The Style I used.. Thanks For The Vote Though..

Voted For: KahnShienz

I Grasp Hang Man, And Slice-His-Neck
And Put My *Nike's To His Dome* To Get His *Mind IN Check* =-
His Time-Is-Wrecked, Theres A New Kid On-The-Boards
Cause Kahn Come Wit A *Round Of Applause* To *Clap* At-This-Whore =-
Your Whole Styles-A-Bore, You Cant Take Kahn Out-Of-A-Battle
Cause I Got This *Baby Lookin Moist* Like He *Masterbating Wit Rattles* =-
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCHES NICE META'Z


Ya Whole Shirt-Is-Wet, How You Gonna Let Them Hollows-Hit-You
Shoot Quick And-DisMiss-You
Cause I *Grip More Nines* than *Freshman Grudges In School* =-
Fuck I-Really-Pitty-You, Cause My Punches Always-Land
And Sink Quick In Ya Chest Like Quicksand
Cause Like *KKK On Blacks* Now You Really *A HUng Man* =-
You Really A-Dumb-Man, Even Awnsering Was-A-Catastrophy
This Verse Will Cost-You-B
Cause I Got You *Hanging On My Words* Like *Apostrophys* =-
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE U HAD MULTI'Z AND PERSONALS AND PUNCHES THEY WERE DECENT NICE


KAHN- U HAD AN SWELL VERSE NICE PUNCHES NICE META'Z AND "OK" FLOW WORK ON THA STRUTRE, NICE MULTI'Z






u weak fuck get buck'ed face tucked unda the seat
beat ya down till ya style quits N forever decese
im the lyrical beast bless'in ya chest like a prist
never da lease i reless anger N bang-ya with a 2by4 N permanitly put u to sleep
if i strech my bar its cuz u'r a meal thats ready to get
(w)raped up
put da 4's to ya nostilas so u nose u gonna get blasted-up
^%^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT U MAKING THREATS NOT PUNCHES BUT U HAD "OK" FLOW FIX THA STRUTURE A LIL


freestyle only take sec u take a life time befor comein up with a tight-line
bit-mines N whind up with ya teeth broken bearly holding on to ya life-line
take ya N burn ya to ash then smoke ya on the air-plain to really be high
my flow like weed-smokers at 10, gonna keep burnin till i die
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIIGHT NICE MULTI'Z AND NICE GOOD PUNCHES MAYNE GOOD NICE


HANG-MAN= U HAD AN "ok" VERSE NEEDS TO WORK ON PUNCHES THOUGH SOME OF CHA PUNCHES MADE SOME EFFECTS BUT HIT HARDER MAYNE FIX CHA FLOW FIX CHA STRUTURE



OVERALL=

KAHN BEST LINE


Your Whole Styles-A-Bore, You Cant Take Kahn Out-Of-A-Battle
Cause I Got This *Baby Lookin Moist* Like He *Masterbating Wit Rattles* =-
^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PUNCH AND GOOD FLOW MAYNE


HANG-MAN BEST LINE=



freestyle only take sec u take a life time befor comein up with a tight-line
bit-mines N whind up with ya teeth broken bearly holding on to ya life-line

^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH NICE META'Z


AIIIIGHT OUT OF THEM 2 PUNCHES I HAVE TO GO WITH KAHN HIS PUNCH CAME ALOT HARDER AND MORE EFFECTIVE MADE ME LAUGH TOO


HANG-MAN CHA PUNCH MADE SOME EFFECT GOOD PERSONAL NICE PUNCH BUT KAHN JUST CAME HARDER WITH HIS PUNCH

*NUFF SAID*

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