Tactics-Comin Out the Shadow
 

Replied to Tony Rove and RKS

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/tacticsnfxmusic.htm

It's the first song on the page, I started writing it at midnight, finished at 2, not even 12 hours old, peep it, Devize on the beat.

-Tactics

Uppin this, only 6 views so I know barely anyone's looked at it. Peace.

*listening*

Intro says you're trying to express some emotions and yet it was really blah. Anyway, flow was nice, but the lyrics were kinda blah. Nothing really impressed me. I mean, it was alright, don't get me wrong, but you're saying the same shit as just about everyone. I'm feeling the emotion.....the flow actually fell off in a few spots because of your syllable counts. Anyway, keep dropping....you obviously got potential

lyrically.. you got some dope metaphores.. but your flow is shaky.. try an open flow.. let it flow.. you always cutt your words off at the end of ya bar.. let it flow intot the next or just say the word completly.. when u spit, you shoudlnt have to cutt off your word to get it to flow.. jsut work on ya flow.. the rest will come when you find ya style.. -1