how's this then...?
 

(beat: B.O.B.)

Flowing like a river through your stereo,
Like Alice sliding quick down the rabbit hole,
Was it Morpheus? Nah it was Neo,
With the oracle who looks like Miss Cleo, I’m a Leo,
Not a Sagittarius, the election’s over,
Now what’s the fuss?
Donald Trump,
What a Chump,
On every fucking channel he’s showing up.
Peace, love and harmony,
All of them things sound good to me,
Scotty P,
On trial in the bay, never took the stand,
Don’t know what to say.
Trying to get the lay-up,
Not shoot the Tre.
Someone’s Somewhere Everyday
But Scott’s still on trial in the bay.
Wake up every morning drink my morning mug,
Gota go to class, my books I’ll lug
Twist and shout,
Peace, I’m out,
Catch ya’ll later,
On the flip side,
Spend all of 3 bills on my sick new ride.

This wasn't a great peice...elevate...

...also i'd change ur name quick, coz 20 graND will merk u.

fuck him...........

and fuck you too... its spelled 'piece'

lmao...ur correcting me...take a look at that piece of shit that u call a verse.
i'd correct u...but hell, i aint got all day. keep it shut herb.

Here's a freestyle 'bout gay ass cosmos.


you a fag
you eat girls on the rag
yo mama sux on ma bag
so dat means i aint no fag

(who you calling a fag?)

cosmos, more like fagmos
what kinda name is that?
ill hit you in the ballz with a bat/

I ain't batman or robbin, but i'll sure be robbin you with a bat, man.

PEACE!!!!!

ps. FUCK OFF

ur not too smart beefin with him man....you'll get merked easily bitch....and this wasnt that good of a piece it laced vocab structure flow and it was weak..ur a newb so dont expect to be the best

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peace~1

weak shit homo:) don't beef when you just arrived foo. overall: 3/10

fuck yeah, i suck

but still.. fuck off