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Brainstorm
ICE PICKS VERSE
Parapalegic, my fighting stance too strategic no shadows om my kicks too much cheap shit horrific, to specific, U''m comin through with gugitzu bone-crushin, bone-breaken, as i get into scorpion styles, with the speed of a cheeta hit ya pressure pointz withe light skillz I be the master, Iron palms is elemental combinations damaging nations in the mental cerebral cortex is obselete you''ll die ten times if your tryin to test me tae-ous master, rhyme stlyes disaster studied on the the cliffs of mountains readin scrolls holdin it down, iron sheik, will come apprenticed in the temple with --ha ha I went through torture, deadly stylez I''m the author ingested mentals, yeah, they make me supernova triple-spinnin, kicks, side-kicks, and hook-kicks they comin chiller, so, you must be realler!!!!!!--- Entity,s verse i want all ya''ll to cop and listen no fishin'' for complements not in my mission, ya''ll wishin, i would catch holy wrath like an Egyptian caniptions, cuz my rhymin dose was bad prescription, my flow just be the head lock forcin'' submission, theres no admittin from me that i spit regrett''n casualties, actually,/ the only factual truth lies in my book full of lyrical proof , style assasin like John Wilkes-Booth, your loose goose gave me the indication you full of hot air, you folded when you should of been hold''n on this red eyed jack wild pair, danger does not beware my life or anyone there near me, prepare for the war of cold rhymes, half glared sympathy cats with no empathy, just ready to empty three, clips fall because three shots dont satisfy their killing spree, knowledge of self keep me confidentially resigned, if not that my gloc would put in them black and white lines, the stripes and prisoner times aint right for niggas of my kind, i gotta get mine, when i hit with them verse lines, fucks with most lifelines, name must be V-fib cuz the doc said it like three times, peace to all ya''ll luv from the primetime, IM a smoke a blunt and just chill in the meantime |
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this was good, ice-pick verse flow very good, word-play was good, creativeness was good in every-line thats why i kept on reading.... 8.5 outta 10...
Entity,s verse wow u'r verse was FIRE..... flow was good, word-play was good, creativeness was good on each line.... danm i aint never really read anything from u but i gotta say that verse was probley one of the best i've read in a while.... 9.0 outta10 nice collabo fellas all together 8.8 outta 10 |
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