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-..Jono..- vs J.R. Freeze
Battle Rules:
6 -16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting due 35 mins checkin 30 mins Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-23-04 at 05:54 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 05:25 PM.
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-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 05:40 PM.
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Dawg, ya seem uptight, let me *RELAX YA MIND* by *BLOWIN’ YA BRAINS ONTO YOUR COUCH*//
Cause yo *SPITS* is only *Sick cause ya Dad’s *DICK IS IN YA MOUTH*// You Think you the *KING BEE*? Bitch, you just a little *MAGGOT~IN~A~TURD*// Cause if *RAP* was a *RACE* with a *PREGNAUNT WOMAN*, you’d see this *FAGGOT~FINISH~3RD*// (Think!) ***PULLS THE TRIGGER*** Unless you *EAT OUT THE DEVIL’s ASS*, *HOT SHIT* is something you *NEVER~GON’~SPIT*// Face it bitch, *YOU BEATING ME* will *NEVER GO DOWN* like the *NATIONAL DEBT*// (DAYUM!) Let this be a lesson that *J.R.* don’t give a fuck about *YOU* or *WHATEVER~YOU~WRITE*// Cause this faggot is just like a *$5 HOOKER’s PUSSY*, cause you’ll *NEVER~BE~TIGHT*// Who you think you fooling in ya verse? All that *GANGSTA SHIT TALK* like you be *HARMING~MOST~MAN*// I See the truth: You just be *TALKIN’ MORE SHIT* than a fuckin’ *CHARMIN~SPOKESMAN*// ***TAKE THIS BITCH OFF LIFE SUPPORT!!!*** Face it faggot, you *JUST GOT MERKED* and I’d *SAY~IT~IF~I~CAN*/ But *BENT OVER IN FRONT OF YA BROTHER* is the only way you *TAKE~IT~LIKE~A~MAN*// Lesson Learned: This faggot is just a *PIEGON* tryin to fuck with a *DESERT ~EAGLE~*// Cause I’m *BEYOND* you, you lack *LOGIC* so you got *SUNK* like *REGGIE MILLER’S FREE~THROWS*// FLATLINE.............. I’ll physically ‘Stomp~Ya~Face~In’ til ya BRAIN ‘INFOSSILS~DA~PAVEMENT’ so ya THOUGHTS can TOUCH every SOLE of da ‘POPULATION’!!// (Sole=Soul) Got ‘Glockks~For~Sprayin’ dat’ll parole the Doctors ‘OPER~ATIONS’ & leave BLOOD SPITTIN out this “CAT” like PUSSYHOLES IN ‘OV~U~LATION’!!// |
Homie your in the wrong type of "Age", I got a hard time your anything older than the age of Six
Even if i coughed around you n made you "Sick", The rules made you lose it nigga cus unless your "Biting" off my lines there is no way you can "Spit"... Shit, thanks to my Punches i'm leaving you with more "Wind" then a morning feels "Mist" How come Jono had to leave this bitch dissed? The way im spittin now i deserve to be "Grindin" with Clipse..shit, leavin yo no name ass's tombstone engraved "Thanks to Jono too dissed to be missed"..damn I jus made another fan, jus cus i gave you myself to finally have somethin "Real" to measure as a man It isnt jus your ass thats sweatin, my lines are causin you pores along with the sweat drippin down your glands, i could drop you in one "Punch" bitch Alakazam, I dont need more than a quick set of lines to leave you with a "Murked" Brand.. -..Jono..- |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
You Got My Vote, But You Need To Get Rid Of The ~ And * I Used To Do The Same Thing, But If It Is Bold Your Verse Looks Better And It Doesnt Ruin Ya Flow.. Reason For The Vote.. I Voted For You Cause You Had Better Punches And You Had Good Disses.. The Reason I Didnt Vote For Jono Was Because He Had To Many Self Refrences.. |
Voted For: -..Jono..-
I think that -..Jono..- got this battle because i feel that -..Jono..- came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt -..Jono..- got it they were used effectifely and were on point J.R u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to -..Jono..- good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to -..Jono..- and flow and structure i'll give to -..Jono..- but both layouts were fucked...sort them. V/-..Jono..- There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
JONO Quote:
^^nope…..stretched as fuck….decent attempt, but it got chu no where….played punch as well Quote:
^^decent attempt again, but nawwww….1st line: wack… Quote:
^^nawwww dawg…..yo punches are horribly off…. My advice: shit, keep battlin and reading the battles of vets….work on wording yo punches better, think about what you typin… JR FREEZE Quote:
^^nyce nyce….i got tha last line, creative….but, tha second line…naaawwww, dick in ya mouth lines is old… Quote:
^^HOT SHIT!….im loving yo multis and punches…good job fam Quote:
^^yep yep…onpoint fa reals…lines a lil off, but content was some of the best ive seen on this board.. Quote:
^^hot shit mayne…..i see you…you definitely know what you doin…mad props comin from me My Advice: mayne, you doin it…but to keep yo verse on tha even, try to equally distribute tha multis…otha than that, you got tha fire…I see you doin it big on here….keep it up fam so basically JR FREEZE took this, simply better verse, consistent and hard thru and thru….both emcees keep it up and elevate….JR, maybe we can battle sometime.. |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
jr freeze that was hott man keep it goin u had superior voacab over this kid nice structure and ryhmes good flow built up ur metas n shyt u got thisa one on lock u had better punches jonos rhymes were kinda shady and he jus fell short in this one keep em comiin n keep uppin check out my battle vs weedex |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
CLOSE BATTLE YO VOTE: FREEZE LYRICS: FREEZE STRUCTURE: JONO - FREEZE URS WAS FUCKED ORIGNALITY: FREZE MULTIS: FREEZE PUNCHES: FREEZE WORDPLAY - FREEZE FLOW: JONO OPENING: JONO ENDING: FREEZE ( OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH DAT 1ST BAR AFTA **FLATLINE*8 BOUT POULATION AND INFOSSILIN HIS BRAON WAS HEAVYNESS BLUD..DAMN.. FREEZE: 8.5/10 JONO: 7.5/10 RETURN FAVOUR WIT HONEST VOTE - LINKS IN SIG |
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