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D-Illar-1 11-23-04 07:13 PM

love in first-sight
 
I was walking out of the music store with me and my friends
I had on an brown hoodie , black pant’z , and some timbs
that’s when I saw u walking out of victoria with u and cha friends
Had on an green blouse, green pant’z , and converse , green latins
I had my head down but I didn’t know what made me look up
But thank god that I did cause ya beauty was blessed from tha above
My jaw was jittering if I’d walk up and talk to u I’ll prop stutter
Your hair was shining and gleeming like brown shine haze coco butter
Girl ya eyes is like an newborn kittin, I guess love in 1st sight is true
Then u’d turn around and started to walk away then I felt kinda blue
I’d embarrass myself taking an 1st step forward step on my shoe lace and fell
Felt kinda stupid, just laying there on the ground, then I heard an voice ‘need help”
When she’d hold my hand I felt this hot warmth feeling coming from tha heart
that’s when we started ending up having an A & B conversation from tha start
End up giggling and laughing then told my homies we going to an special paradise
She looked at me “ paradise?” I said “yea, paradise lets me take u on an car ride”
to me I already felt we was an good couple already like bobby and whitney
I felt this was an long relationship like an phantom u see within me
An love first-sight just turned my day into an good-day like heaven
Me and her sitting on the beach chillin my first-date and iam still a virgin

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Oz™ 11-23-04 07:57 PM

yo...that was nice man...good structure n flow....isnt u d-illar-1 from rapworlds and planetrap...

8.5/10

stay up

D-Illar-1 11-23-04 07:58 PM

Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Damn Damn~! Shhhhhhhhhhhhh

Oz™ 11-23-04 07:59 PM

lol......ite nigga........................................


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