Borrrreeeeddd Freestyle
 

My Rhymes Are Intellegent Shinins Irrelevant
Definin The Best Of Em Line Up The Rest Of Em
Find Me Smashin Em I Be Attackin Em
Leavin Em Like Iraq An Dem, Droppin Lyrical Bombs
Aint Fearin No Harm Its Clear Im The Bomb
Im To Sick Spittin Shit Ruthless Splittin You
In 2 When I Get At You N Laugh When The 22
Aim And Spray At You Layin You In The Dirt
Foo Mommas Eyes Full Of Hurt Shoulda Know I Was Gon Merk You
Now U Merked Lookin Up At The Roof Of The Church
Wit Ya Eyes Closed Soul Risen The Doughs My Vision
The Flowin Is Intuition Listenin To The Killa
Villain Neva Submittin Just Comin In Slittin
If An Attitiude Is What You Comin In Wit

ok drop, you have some good rhyme's in it.
Foo Mommas Eyes Full Of Hurt Shoulda Know I Was Gon Merk You
this line is stretched, and you sorta lost focus toward's the end.

4/10
keep dropping,keep elevating

give it up my dude an try one of your other hobbies dont take it to heart.