RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Elevated Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=193)
-   -   *Troop* vs Socrates (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161850)

~Luciano~ 11-24-04 03:05 PM

*Troop* vs Socrates
 
Battle Rules:

8 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dr
No im'ng 4 vbotes....cant do that this time sux ni99a

3-0=Ko

u stepped up
Get Knocked the fuck down

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-26-04 at 03:05 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 11-24-04 04:07 PM

Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 04:07 PM.

Logic The Goonie 11-24-04 04:09 PM

Troop, ill slap you beat you leave you in Iraqi deserts secluded
Cuz kid i’m energized for this assault with no batteries included!
I’m just plain too complex with the flow, so Troop guess what
I’ll beat you down to a bloody pulp..........until ‘juicy’ the punch
You need two days to post? Is it that you can’t be bothered, or
How I made your only “deadline”......a fuckin heart monitor?
Troop aint no man up with his, i hate this fuckin faggot ass kid
I got the world at my fingertips, he as a french manicure at his!

im still mad its only 8 lines, but whatever, i know you cant write that many. :thumbup:

System 11-25-04 02:50 AM

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 02:50 AM.

~Luciano~ 11-25-04 03:05 AM


..Looks at Soc..
Soc's Methods are Not Superior there isnt any Demeanor in Rhyme
This Childs Play why Havent u seen Soc On past 10 Pm Eastern Time

Stop "Justin Ni99as" at Office Depot fondeling and puttin staples in Mister
Word is Killa Kali misses you like Trophy Presentations at Stapes Center

Misspelled LyrikalMonstuh @ School Soc's on Special Attention Teams
Those arent Nightmares your 15 those are Purely Pre Ejaculation Dreams

Rv's Original Dickrider Deliverer a Vet? Guess being on your Knees Pays
Devouring Mimesis Penis 4 Votes.Guess ya "Fuckin Homo's These Days"


his sig says "Justin Ni99as"
his Aim sn is Lyrikalmonstuh
says hes AI's Nightmare
Fuckin Homos these dayz in his sig
In his Calling out Ai thread Memisis is all on his dick

Logic The Goonie 11-25-04 03:15 AM

*looks at time*

first personal is fake
mister and center dont rhyme
I'm 16...so another fake
*dies at how simple last punch is*

but at least it was a punch for once in your career

let the voting begin.

~Luciano~ 11-25-04 03:16 AM

i accidently pasted the same bar twice

but this is a Ko
once again he drops simple as fuck
wit nuthin but self glorification

Macca 11-25-04 04:26 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

for vets I thought they both were kinda played. But I say *Troop* got this with good multis. punches were off. Flow was good. and 5 personals. Good ones.

Socrates structure fucked up his verse. I couln't figure out what rhymed and what didnt. Played punches.
Well my vote= *Troop*

Like*Troop* Says

....`Nuff Said....

And I'm No Dick Rider.

Zeke 11-25-04 06:54 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

*Troop*
I Say *Troop* Got This Battle Due To His Sick Vocabulary And Punches....Personals Was Mad!! Tight.......Structure Was Decent

Best Line
Soc's Methods are Not Superior there isnt any Demeanor in Rhyme
This Childs Play why Havent u seen Soc On past 10 Pm Eastern Time................9.5/10

Socrates
Okay Flow Was Decent Vocabulary Was Alright Not All That Good And Structure Was Alright....Your Main Problem Is Personals You Got To Find SOmeThing That Will Hit Him Hard...But Other Then That Your Good......8/10

Vote/*Troop*

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

GangsStarShit 11-25-04 07:07 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
ok i'm jus checkin up seeing as i'm battlin the alias

~Luciano~ 11-25-04 12:04 PM

upppin this shit

FlowIntelligent. 11-25-04 01:52 PM

Voted For: *Troop*

dope battle.. Soc your opener was more of a self glorification than a punch... and actually almost all your punches included yourself in them boasting of your skill not a good idea ... your closer was your best bar but everything else was basic... same with troop you were basic but your opener was better than his opener and your closer was good decent verses expected more of both of you but still decent....

Magic5 11-25-04 01:55 PM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
Devouring Mimesis Penis 4 Votes.Guess ya "Fuckin Homo's These Days"


Yet you were the one who used to IM me for votes..

Weird eh?

Recluse 11-25-04 01:59 PM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
i don't know this shit was pretty close....

~Luciano~ 11-25-04 02:28 PM

3-0 Ko

Soc was talkin all that shit

told u will never beat me in a real battle
u fuckin Bitch

....Nuff Said....


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:07 PM.