- Prodigy Child -
 

KeyStyled

im the intellectual~prophecy of this hip-hopcracy /
lyrical prodigy layin down rhymes to show technique properly//

visit pharmacy... to find ur mental medication/
i got a mase wit spikes on it 2 come and knock ur face in/
hide in ur basement, the only safe location/
ur ass vacatin when ur family tree need evacuation/
u play the station and my ass is solid breakin/
makin peace look like an indonesian vacation//

get ur reservation cuz ur here longer than u planned to be/
fluidz lay the track deeper than the stars in the galaxy//

watch this tradegy try to vocate me of burglary/
wait for christmas, cuz this clause dont bring presents... just surgery//

destroy u verbally... wit consistent persitance/
stretch u across the floor wider than universal distance/
save ya visions ... and go thru with coallitions/
ur as misplaced saint angels in state prisons//

the rapid man comin thru like an astrovan /
turn this happy land unuseful like a broken hand//

hope u understand... people like me are the pacifists at battle/
more explicit than gilligan with a whore on an island witout a paddle/
hold the lantel... cuz a heat like me to hot to handle /
got reality underviewed like the media when they find a scandal//

my time is up and rapid's here to end it/
caught up in my room like a student that just got suspended //


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Zilla

Gimme some FeedBack !!! >:|

dont stretch cha lines that much

nice wordplay

but work on the flow

and

work on keeping ya lines lengh

its aiiiiiiigiht

nuttin stand out but dem wordplays

elevate

7/10

drop an feedback in my open mic

"expressing freestyle"

*nuff said*

i liked this nice jey came pretty good i dont think u stretched ya lines i give u a 8/10 on this drop