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Expression Freestyle
THIS AN FREESTYLE OF EXPRESSING OF MY FEELINGS
SHIT DONT MAKE SENSE- CAUSE ITS AN FREESTYLE Is this heaven in the presence Is it true what people are speakin Where your soul be locked in a paradise Do god call u up from above to close ur eyes Dying of old age is like an death penalty Like sleep u wouldn’t know if ya heart was beating U can have an heart attack from the touch of devil’s hand Holding your chest , asking for breath its like losing grip from gods hands Then u slip away yo brain goes dead then yo eyes goes fade to black Ya heart stops bumping thumping u had one life , one oxygen that was ya last I can’t help it seeing a dead person in an coffin the most hurt thing is that they can’t say good bye Its hurting me inside writing this is making me go flash-back when I lost my girl in an drive by Her hair was tan-sun-shine color then 5 seconds later it turned to devils red blood I dropped to my kness. why I didn’t took that 9 to 5 shots into my hoood Seeing one of yo people u loved decease who’z fault? Was it god or the devils Now iam going to sit in my black corner and watch the world around me crumple I dropped to my kness. why I didn’t took that 9 to 5 shots into my hoood - MEANING WHY I DIDNT TOOK THEM BULLETS IN MY SKULL~! |
GJ dawg..
drew up some ?'s and was very personal I can tell.. structure and font had me squinting but still iight good flow too 8/10 cuz of font |
good shit drastic 8/20 we gotta collab soemtime me you and epic famop
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8/10 i meen hahaha
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o aiiiiiiiiiiiiight i feel cha yo uppin for some more feedback..............
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