Apathy
 

yo I'm the alien tongue you can call me Apathy
Motherfucker's who wanna battle me better have backup batteries
I'm burying Calvary and turn them in to causalities
cats will be sprayed and gradually drag the dead bodies across the galaxy
you don't wanna get fucked, you better stick with chastity
you got some audacity to think your even rappin with me
I automatically tear up the human anatomy
And make you lose phatness like your taking off calories
Philosophy majors couldn't imagine or fathom me
it's heavy like walking on planet's with no gravity
gradually I open up my own academy
where professors will lecture upon the intellect of Apathy
now I got groupies grabbin' me, jealous rapper's dreamin' of stabbin me
coming to shows and tryin to blast at me
you wanna battle my crew you must be smokin' moldy crack
this ain't butt fucking so there'll be no holdin' back
when it's your turn you get burned like whore's on Howard stern
this ain't KRS but it's your turn to learn
I'll have ya stuck in a bad position like hounds screwin'
and when you leave the stage and hear the whole damn crowd booin'
while ya playa hatin' when they throw my tape in
pass the microphone and I'll leave ya bloody like a butchers apron
where ya comin' from think that your nice, I'm tight
your slower than the second coming of Jesus Christ

yo hit this up let me know what im doin

good vocab and structure.ur doin' fine.7.5/10.keep em comin'